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LotR -- Book 3 - Chapter 01 - The Departure of Boromir
Welcome to the chapter-by-chapter discussion of The Two Towers! Interestingly, the book begins with an ending, which only emphasizes the fact that LotR is one book, not a trilogy. (In my opinion, Peter Jackson's use of this chapter at the end of the first movie was a good choice.) The chapter title is rather ambiguous - did anyone think that it meant Boromir was going to Minas Tirith when first reading the book? We now know that it's a final and tragic (though redemptive) departure, of course.
Actually, the book begins with a synopsis of FotR; if anyone would like to comment on that or has noticed anything particularly interesting about it, this is the place to do so. One thing that stands out in this chapter is Aragorn's uncertainty. Do you think that adds depth to his character? As mark/Helen commented in the previous chapter discussion, he is not even able to make use of the possibility of seeing on Amon Hen. Apparently the personal situation of the one who comes there affects what happens. Unlike the movie, we do not see Boromir fighting against the orcs in the book, but stay with Aragorn, seeing the events from his point of view. He is the only one of the remaining Fellowship members who is not involved in fighting action. Gimli's answer to Aragorn's attempt to make the right decision is fascinating, even chilling: Quote:
Much of the rest of the chapter is searching for clues as to the fate of the four hobbits, and the decision to follow the orcs who took Merry and Pippin closes it with the begin of their chase. I'm sure Boromir's end will be a major discussion point, but what other parts of the chapter are important to you, and why?
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On to more serious matter I'm afraid: This is a chapter of riddles (The S rune, what happened to the Hobbits, who are these bigger, larger orcs, what to do next), so as you can see the chapter is full of riddles. I think the events in this chapter are playing off Aragorn's characteristics right now. Sort of like Henry James The Turn of the Screw. The characters appear all nice and prompt, and they tidy up everything so good, but underneath it all is pretty demented evil. He uses a high vocabulary, rich terms, but underneath all the formality is some disturbing thoughts. Anyway....in this chapter we have a bunch of riddles, and I think this is to emphasize Aragorn's character at this time. Aragorn has no idea what he's done, he has no idea what to do, so Aragorn's personality is like a "riddle." He can't figure it out, he can't figure out the course to take. Notice, in this chapter when Aragorn struggles who picks him up? Why Legolas and Gimli. Esty, has pointed out from Gimli: Quote:
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Just want to make a few random observations. First there’s an interesting exchange in one of the early drafts. Aragorn tells Legolas & Gimli what Boromir had done:
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Second, the episode on Amon Hen. Frodo sees with enhanced vision, & Aragorn was also intended to an the early draft, but his ‘vision’ was to have included a sight of Gandalf similar to the one Frodo saw in Galadriel’s Mirror. But why does Frodo see the whole of Middle earth laid out before him while Aragorn sees only what we’d expect him to see from a high hilltop: Quote:
Third, why do Aragorn, Gimli & Legolas take so much time over Boromir’s funeral arrangements? It seems illogical - shouldn’t they be off after the Hobbits straight away? I was always struck by the strangeness of their actions. It seems both right & wrong to do what they do. Logically, its silly. Boromir’s dead, the Hobbits are alive & in need, yet the three remaining companions take time to take Boromir to the boat, row it out into the stream & then sing a funeral dirge over his body. Yet on some level I know it was both right & necessary, & I would have lost all respect for them if they hadn’t done what they did - what’s that line about the heart having reasons that reason knows not of? And that brings me to my final point - the funeral song. They didn’t actually sing that, did they? Well, how could they? Make up a song, metre perfect, on the spur of the moment. I think what we have here is something added in to the tale afterwards. The truth’ has been mythologised. We know they must have simply expressed their grief at the time & only when the tale came to be written down was the song (possibly composed at a later date in Gondor, possibly by Bilbo or Frodo) ‘inserted’. Tolkien is not writing a novel set in Middle earth, he is writing a legend of that world. History has become legend, & its the legend that we’re given here. But as to the song itself, its obviously intentional that Legolas sings of the South wind & the Sea. Quote:
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Thank you again for another well-wrought intro to the discussion, Estelyn. I do indeed have other things to say about the chapter, but for now let me get Boromir out of the way.
This chapter provides the one of the remaining pieces of evidence in my point that, in Boromir, Tolkien was depicting his concept of the Northern Heroic Warrior. (See Tolkien's "The Homecoming of Beorhtnoth" for his ideas about noble errors and heroes dying for their folly. I don't want to repeat myself too much here, however much I enjoy listening to my argument again.) Saucepan has said in the previous chapter that we are analysing Boromir psychologically. Here let me extricate my argument from that statement. Rather, I consider Boromir narratologically. Whoa! Big word. Not as big as verisimilitude, but up there. I mean simply that I consider Boromir the character's function in terms of plot or narrative/story. Tolkien the writer has a problem. He's got the son of the Steward of Minas Tirith who thinks he's the One thank you very much, oldest son and Dad's favourite and the Big Man on Campus. Having won election as campus leader, he just knows he is going to be President of the University someday. However, Tolkien's got the 'once and future King', Aragorn-Arthur, who is going to return to claim the throne for righteousness and true love's sake. (My flippancy here does not do justice to how Tolkien rewrites the courtly love scenario in Aragorn and Arwen, but that is for another chapter anyway.) Now, how does a writer resolve that situation? He can let them go mano e mano, duking it out for the top dukedom, so to speak. But that will interfer with his depiction of Elessar's true nobility. Better to get the pretender out of the way somehow. And out of the way before the big A starts his lonely journey of proving himself. What kinds of 'somehow' are available? Well, there's a chance to demonstrate by opposition the kind of true nobility which the rightful king will demonstrate. That is, show how the Pretender does not measure up. Then, there is the very attractive opportunity to demonstrate something of the power of the Ring over a character who can safely, without damaging the main plot line, be done away with. And, finally, there's a wonderful opportunity to call into play the most important moral value which the quest to destroy the Ring will show: the value of pity. Boromir the character didn't have a chance. He was just too perfectly expendable. He can, then, go greatly in to that goodnight. Boromir's death provides Tolkien with the chance to create an essential feature of the Norther Warrior's demise: the funeral boat. Expending time on this scene demonstrates two things: the value of the dead in this kind of society--as the earthly home of the spirit they deserve a respectful closure-- as well as the funeral rites befitting a hero. Here, for example, is the funeral boat of Scyld Scefing from Beowulf. I'm using Seamus Heaney's translation, so his name is Shield Sheafson. Quote:
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This is rather a short chapter - only about seven and a half pages. Why? Perhaps in part because it's not really its own chapter; in terms of content, it is more like the conclusion of the previous chapter, "The Breaking of the Fellowship". This is a nice little trick Tolkien plays: he leaves us in the midst of the action at the end of Book II (only for Frodo and Sam are things in any way concluded there), putting the literal division between the books before the natural conclusion of Book II (that conclusion being Boromir's death and Aragorn's decision to go after Merry and Pippin). Nonetheless, I'm inclined to agree with Estelyn that Peter Jackson actually made the right decision here; this is perhaps one of the few cases where the movie-aesthetic really is different from the book-aesthetic.
This chapter is in my opinion probably the best portrayal of Aragorn in the book. Aragorn, I will admit, is not my favorite character. Not that I dislike him - but it often seems that he lacks depth. In the discussion of I-10 I said: Quote:
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This kind of indecision is really needed at this point in the book. One of the dangers of having characters like Aragorn and, especially, Gandalf, aiding Frodo is that, deep down, it is almost impossible for the reader to believe that such figures of benevolent authority will ever fail or be defeated. Only by showing us that they can and do fail (or even better, killing them off) can Tolkien make the reader really worry. |
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One question remains - the main point of putting Scyld into the boat was to 'pay back' - as he came by boat as a child. But that remark is mainly due to my natural nastiness. Me and my long tongue, so to say. I can't be constructive in the case, so I withdraw cheers EDIT: cross-posted with Aiwendil. All of the post above refers to Bb's post (previous but one) END OF EDIT
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I agree that this chapter is more a conclusion of Book I than the beginning of Book II. According to my calender, there were five months between tehg publishing of FotR and TT. That's not too long to wait (certainly not as long as the poor Robert Jordan fans wait on a cliffhanger).
Since the movie has been discussed, I thought there were some very interesting deviations from the book in this scene. Most importantly, everyone in the fellowship realizes that Frodo has to go on by himself, and Merry and Pippin even heroically offer themselves up as a distraction to allow Frodo to escape the Isengard Ureks. Well done, PJ. Quote:
Another example is done by comedians, such as Wayne Brady, who improvise a song on the spot. Granted, sometimes it's lame, but sometimes it's spot on. And Aragorn and Legolas didn't have the added pressure of trying to be funny in front of an audience. So, in short, I think that it's not at all unrealistic to believe that they made the funeral song up on the spot. My $0.02
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As to Bb's points re Boromir - I agree up to a point, but I also think Boromir is a perfectly believable character in his own right, & if he serves as a foil for Aragorn that may serve the purposes of the plot that merely shows Tolkien's greatness. In other words, I could see Boromir working as a character in other stories, without an Aragorn figure to give him relevance. Both characters are valid & believeable, & so is the clash between them. I don't think Boromir's death & the effect it has on the others would be as moving if he was merely a means of showing Aragorn in a positive light. After all the interactions between many of the characters could be presented in the same way - to what extent is Gollum used to bring out elements in Frodo's & Sam's characters? Or Sam to bring out elements in Frodo's (or Gollum's) character. Is Boromir so 'disposable' a figure? I have to lean towards the 'psychological' interpretation of him. He is a complex character in his own right as well as being everything you say in terms of what he brings to the fore in Aragorn. We're all 'foils' to others in our own way, but that doesn't make us any less 'real', or any more 'disposable'. Also, yes, his funeral echoes an ancient funereal tradition, & no doubt that was intentional on Tolkien's part, but given the circumstances of the plot & the situation the characters found themselves in, it was also the only logical way to 'dispose of the body'. What else were they going to do with him? As for using him 'narratologically' I'm uncertain - Tolkien simply didn't have things planned out in that kind of way. From the early drafts its clear he hadn't decided what was to happen to Boromir - & as B88 has pointed out his original intention for Boromir was very different. It seems to me that his death & the mode of his funeral came to Tolkien not much before he actually wrote it. There's a danger in confusing art with artifice & I think Tolkien was motivated by the former. |
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I have always found this chapter very affecting; my first read of it inspired me to draw a picture of Boromir's death scene, something which always comes to mind when I read it again. The scene in the film was as I had imagined it all those years ago, and thus, is one of my favourites in both book and film.
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Here Aragorn shows just why he is loved and admired. He comforts Boromir in his dying moments. It is not immediately apparent whether Aragron truly means these words, but as the tale moves on, it becomes clear that he did admire Boromir as a comrade; after all, it's hard to imagine Aragorn crying over a man he did not admire. And it is Aragorn who leads the funeral lament. He displays himself as any respected military leader might; he is affected by the death of a valued comrade, even a little shaken by it. He tends the body with honour and dignity, leading his living comrades in mourning, and once all due respects have been paid, turns his mind to the next move. If Aragorn's actions are viewed as a whole, including those written about in this chapter, it is more possible to see him as a rounded figure. I too can find him he comes out with slightly pompous words at times, but I think this is perfectly allowable for a character who is supposed to be a king in exile, a military leader. About the mourning song - perhaps this song would be based upon a familiar format used at such tragic events; I noticed how they spoke of the points of the compass in turn, which did suggest that an established 'format' was being made use of. And verbosity does seem to be commonplace in Middle Earth, so I don't find it so peculiar that words could be composed on the spot. Quote:
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Another "trick" for making up songs on the spot is to use established patterns. Iin Homer's day, "Rosy Fingered Dawn" shows up more than once. I suspect that Lament for Boromir has some re-useable patterns in it, and the implication is that they might have come from previous dirges. Aragorn fought for both Rohan and Gondor ("Thorongil"...) and so has heard more than one lament in his day.
I also wonder-- with the Old English tendency to boast over a cup: Ælfwine then said, he spoke with courage: "Remember the times that we often spoke at mead, when on the bench we raised up our boast, saviors in hall, about hard battle; Now may he who would be bold be tested. ( Battle of Maldon ) Perhaps did Aragorn, Gimli, and Boromir talk and jest about such things? How many Gondorian songs did Boromir sing between Rivendell and Parth Galen? And did those songs affect their lament for him? And I wonder also-- did warriors jest about how they want to be remembered? Ever written your own epitaph, or what you wanted it to be, as an exercise? I can imagine warriors doing the same thing. (Especially after reading 'Battle of Maldon, ' where such things come up often )
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Boromir's last words intrigue me.
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While it could mean both that he had failed to save his people and/or Merry and Pippin, I had always thought it could mean that he had failed the test of the temptation of the Ring. Gandalf did mention that Boromir repented before the end and that could easily be referring to:
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Boromir's horn and other stories.
One thing that intrigues me is the blowing of the horn of Boromir right on the bounds of old Gondor. Was Boromir unwittingly heralding the return of the King?
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Divisions and Questions
I think the other area of major interest in this chapter is that, post-Breaking, the book now neatly divides itself. The reader becomes aware instantly with Book III that the thick main narrative strand of FotR cannot easily be recaptured, as the book splits in these opening chapters into the three strands. This is easy symbolism to understand, and the reader is left hoping that the strands will reunite, for closure and catharsis.
The other point on these natural schisms is JRRT's choice of which strand to start with in Book III. In terms of action, and emotive force, the scene of Boromir's death has the most impact, yet is that the author's sole reason to open with it? On a more personal note, when stories split like this, do you have a favoured strand, and read a little impatiently through the others, until you return to the strand you have the most interest in? This question probably only applies to your first reading.
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Amon Hen-- I don't think the hill wore out its magic. But anything supernatural takes participation to experience. If Ted Sandyman had stood on that hill, do you think he would have seen anything? I don't.
Even for those who are very capable-- it doesn't always come together. Think of the times when Gandalf's supernatural abilities are frustrated. He can't remember; or something blocks him; or he just makes a mistake, a bad choice, and his magic doesn't do him much good if he's in the wrong place. Isn't Gandalf supernatural? Of course he is. But it's like anything else; you're never 100% effective 100% of the time. It comes and goes, sometimes you're 'on', sometimes you're not. An olympic athlete has to be in the right mental and physical "space" to give an olympic performance. Just being in the venue doesn't make you a winner. But being out of the venue doesn't help much if you want that medal. Being on top of Amon Hen isn't an automatic visionary experience. But if you are seeking a vision, and you can have them, and you know what to do, or you are gifted in that area-- it might all come together, like it did for Frodo (who ran up there with no clear thoughts in mind and no expectations, hence, open to whatever he might see.) Or it might not come together at all, as when Aragorn ran up the hill, worried about the fellowship, frantically chasing Frodo, annoyed with Boromir, and wishing Gandalf was there to help. He saw nothing. Perhaps he was Meant to see nothing (there I go with capitals again) or perhaps he could have seen something if he was prepared and ready, and in the right emotional and mental and spiritual 'space'. He wasn't. He was half-frantic. No visionary 'gold medal' that day for Aragorn. But: -the olympic venue hadn't changed. -Aragorn's heart does see and speak clearly later without the aid of Amon Hen. Rimbaud-- my favorite thread(s) have changed many times over the past thirty years-- hmm, almost as often as I've switched 'favorite characters'.
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Seriously, this observation gave me pause to think a bit. Obviously Boromir prides himself on being totally honest all of the time. Men of Minis Tirith do not lie. This implies a question to me, however - is it possible to be totally honest all of the time without being, on some level at least, dishonest with yourself. That is, the complete honesty becomes a sort of self-delusion. I think that the pride issue is the answer in this case. Boromir did in fact lie to himself, every time he told himself that he could handle the ring. We could argue whether the ring was lying to him, or influencing what was already in him, or his own pride and the stories he knew of the ring caused it, but Boromir's greatest lie was to himself. This line of thought has got me wondering about the possibility of living a completely truthfull life. Some truths hurts, such as "the dress you just spent $75 on makes you look fat," or "I cannot really handle the temptation of (the ring, pornography, alcoholism, insert your favorite addictive behavior here)." But all hard truths have a way of being dealt with without being purposely hurtfull. Now that I've re-read my post, I think that the sort of complete honesty that I was refering to in my second paragraph isn't really honesty at all. It is seeing the world and yourself as you would like it to be, not as it really is. Boromir is presented as the ultimate pragmatist (at least in his own mind), wanting to take the ring and fininsh off the enemy, rather than send the ring to almost certain capture in the heart of enemy territory. I would argue that, rather than the most pragmatic of the bunch, Boromir is the most idealistic of the company - an idealism that is not rooted in reality. Chew on that...
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He's a man who has been able to follow his desires for power & authority while still holding to the letter of those teachings, because he was fighting a war against an external 'evil' force. Suddenly he's confronted with the spirit of them & is 'torn in two'. In the end, as Aragorn tells him, he 'conquers' & chooses the spirit over the letter of those teachings. Something St. Paul (?)said about the 'Letter kills, the spirit gives life' springs to mind. |
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I would not want to push this comparison too far, but in some ways the plotting strategy seems almost archetypal in some ways. Not in terms of major narrative structure or mythology, but similar in a poignant way to the patterns of many people's lives. I think, for instance, that the time of most intense friendship is that moment (or those long years) when people are negotiating the transition between adolescence and adulthood. Whether it is high school (which for some is hell I know) or the years of first employment or university, this is the time when interests are explored, relationships forged, paths determined, promises made. At least I think in North America the desire for a community of close and intense friendships is played out over and over in television dramas, whether in Cheers or Friends, or... well, you pick the show. Then, something happens. Adulthood intervenes, in the shape of work and career. Demands upon time, energy, and attention increase. Bonds of personal relationship take over from the group allegiance. (I know that when I first started dating my future husband, my friends in grad school wondered where I went. They saw me with this guy, who they named "Art" after Art Garfunkle, because they hadn't met him yet; it would be six months before they did.) Then, for others, family responsibilities come along and replace the intensity of friendship. Night after night of nursing a sick child do not make for party animals. Something else splinters the old cusp friendships. Some of the gang don't make it. My cousin died at 21 in a car crash. My husband's best buddy died in a motorcycle crash. One summer, three kids on a school outing drowned. The good die young, it used to be said. Then, there seems to be a lull, and people don't start disappearing again until the transition to middle age. But the teen or early adulthood years always claim some one or two in the group. Part of the idyllic moment of LotR for me is the forging of the Fellowship, the eagerness of Merry and Pippin to follow Frodo and Sam. And Sam's utter devotion to Frodo. And the excitement of Rivendell with Aragorn and Boromir, and an elf and a dwarf, joining the group. The horizon expands. They have little idea what they will face, but they pledge to face it together. Then this bond breaks. One doesn't make it. Two leave the others behind to complete their lonely quest. The other younger kids, Merry and Pippin, are abducted. Those who make the transition to adult responsibility, Aragorn, Legolas and Gimli, find their rightful place in fulfilling their duty. As Rimbaud says, we do hope for "closure and catharsis", some kind of return. I certainly wouldn't push this idea of an archetype of the journey through adolescense to adulthood. And I don't mean to suggest that it was 'deliberate' on Tolkien's part. But something about the trajectory of the story follows a pattern of relationship. Maybe we are always wanting to recapture that spring of intense friendships before life gets in the way of life. And maybe we are also wanting to seek out our own journeys beyond those days, whether it is the personal quest or the public one. Not on first read any more , Rim, but I do have a preferred quest. The bleak, agonising one.
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I like all your points Bethberry, I think that the plotting strategy is archetypal. You also bring up something which I've been saying for a while, but I think it's worth repeating...
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I think comparing the original Fellowship, to the 3 new fellowships, I would have to say the original Fellowship's "friendships" were rather weak. They collapsed under pressure. Where if we look at some pressures these smaller Fellowships have to face, they are able to succeed. Helm's Deep, Shelob, Cirith Ungol (I love the moments with Sam and Frodo), Paths of the Dead, Isengard, Pelennor Fields. Which leads me to think that these smaller bonds, were stronger then the Fellowhsip of 9. Since they are able to get through the hard times, where the original Fellowship fell apart.
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Alas poor Boromir ...
Short though it is, this Chapter must rank among my favourites. I still have a vague (unfortunately too vague) recollection of the shock of Boromir's death when I first read the book. It is one of those moments that stays with you.
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This Chapter marks an essential stage in the transformation of Aragorn into one who is worthy to become the leader of Men. It's not that he lacked confidence or hope or leadership skills before. But he is destined to become King of the greatest nation of (Western) Middle earth, and that requires exceptional qualities. These he shows in some measure in lifting himself from despair and rising to the challenge set for him here. But he has to do this himself. The Seat of Seeing cannot provide the solution for him. Like Aiwendil, I have always regarded Aragorn as a rather flat character but, for the reasons discussed above, I have to agree with him when he says that this Chapter is probably the best portrayal of Aragorn in the book. And so, once again, to Boromir. Quote:
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Just a brief allusion back to Aldarion's suggestion that Legolas and Gimli would have had the skills to compose such a song on the spot. I would heartily concur. The key factor here would not be that a few contemporary entertainers possess this ability even today, but rather the very nature of Middle-earth and how learning and story is passed on in a traditional culture.
This world is so different than ours. It is a culture where oral tradition holds equal or even greater weight than that which is written. Many things would be memorized and passed on orally from one generation to the next. In such a setting, most people would have had a small stock of funereal rites and songs in their memory that could be adapted and tweeked to fit a particular situation. They would draw upon this in the same way that I would automatically go to my library and find a particular book of poems that would contain something with meaning for a given situation. It's also interesting to consider that, by all rational standards, it was a terrible mistake for the "good guys" to be standing about singing while the Orcs are dragging the captured Hobbits further and further away. But as badly as the company needed to take off after the kidnapped Hobbits, it was even more essential that they show and define who they are. Unlike the Orcs who let their comrades die without giving them a second thought, Aragorn and his companions take time to show respect and honor for those who have fallen, even if it puts them further behind the kidnappers. To gain time by disregarding a fundamental principle--that of respect for an individual life--is not something Tolkien could countenance in his "heroes".
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HerenIstarion: You make a good point. I think that Shippey discusses the 'one day we shall put it to the test' formula in connection with that passage.
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Of course, one's interpretation of those ideals has some relavance. I recall that in the essay "Turin's Ofermod", Richard West discusses Tolkien's interpretation of the word "ofermod" found in "The Battle of Maldon". The word may be translated "overmood", "overboldness". Many or most scholars read the word as one of praise for Beorhtnoth and as reflecting the heroic ideal of the Anglo-Saxons. Tolkien, on the other hand, read it as expressing fault. Now I don't know enough about "The Battle of Maldon" or Anglo-Saxon literature in general to make a reasonable guess as to which view is correct. But the disagreement suggests that Tolkien's version of the northern heroic ideal may in fact have differed from the truth about it. In a way, then, one could see Boromir as representing the old ideal, the Anglo-Saxon ideal, which is giving way (as it must) to Aragorn, the modern, perhaps Christianized, ideal. It is hard to imagine an Anglo-Saxon epic in which it would not be thought a wholly admirable thing to take the Ring and to use it against the enemy; the idea that power can corrupt and that valour in arms may not be the best course seems distinctly modern. LotR, then, could be viewed as a work that shows a shift in the heroic paradigm, if you will, somewhat like "Beowulf" or, I don't know, American Graffiti - not, perhaps, an intra-Legendarium shift, but rather a real world one. |
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I'm not sure that Boromir is boasting on Aragorn's behalf. Its as likely that he is challenging him. If this is the case them we do have a figure who takes a similar part in AS legends - Unferth in Beowulf. It seems to me that Boromir is requiring Aragorn to prove himself worthy of the claims put forward for him/by him.
I can't help feeling that Boromir actually wants Aragorn to be who he claims but can't bring himself to simply accept those claims. Boromir's role is as a stirrer of unrest, forcing the hero to prove himself worthy. Obviously Aragorn is aware that he will have to do exactly that. Boromir has a long journey to take till he becomes worthy of the funeral he recieves in this chapter - another reason I'm uncomfortable with the idea that he was just made use of as a 'disposable' character so that Tolkien could throw in a 'viking' style funeral. Tolkien held such ancient traditions in too high a regard to just hand one out to the first available character. The very form of his funeral confirms his trancendence of his old self. We see Boromir's spiritual growth throughout the few chapters he is present, from a negative, proud, demanding, even carping, figure, to a true hero deserving of the end he recieves. In this sense I see it not so much as Boromir representing the 'old' ways being replaced by the new as symbolised by Aragorn, but rather as Boromir himself evolving from the one stage to the other. In many ways he actually symbolises the movement from the mythic 'Middle earth' to the world of Men that will replace it. He begins as a classic hero of legend & ends as a 'Christian', having laid down his life for his friends. In a sense he moves from being an 'Isildur' to an 'Aragorn'. |
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Lalwendë, I think you are certainly right. The repatriation of bodies of fallen soldiers is an important part of military history. And, besides, Tolkien's The Homecoming of Beorhtnoth is all about Torhthelm's and and Tídwald's efforts to recover the body of Beorhtnoth after the battle, a bit of a difficult task as he had been decapitated. According to Tolkien, historically, the body was recovered by the wish of the Abbot of Ely and buried in the abby, sans head.
For those of you discussing the meaning of ofermode, it is well to remember that it is found only in that line in The Battle of Maldon, at least as far as our extant sources of Old English literature allow us. So all discussion about translating it depend upon interpreting that one context. It is used to describe Beorhtnoth's action in voluntarily, without military need or pressure, yielding ground to the enemy. For those of you discussing the heroic "wind" poems and the manner of their creation, here's some support to your idea from Tolkien: Quote:
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Like everyone else, I like the manner in which Tolkien moves the story from that of the Fellowship to the fellowships/friendships that will dominate the rest of the tale. To answer Rimbaud’s question: I don’t have a favourite narrative strand – or, rather, I do but it is always the strand I’m not reading. Tolkien is a master of getting us hooked on a story, and then cutting away to another. So I rush through the new one, wanting to get to the old one, but by the time I’m nearing the switch I don’t want to switch as now I’m sold in the current story. So as this chapter begins I’m desperate to know what will happen to Frodo and Sam, but I know that by the time I get to the end of Book III and Shadowfax is bearing Gandalf and Pippin to Gondor, I won’t be able to bear switching! Ah well. To return to the current topic.
I think that in addition to a structural change, this chapter marks a thematic shift of no small import. To this point in the tale, the forces of Good have been attempting to counter the forces of Evil point-for-point. The Black Riders are seeking the Ring, get the Ring to Rivendell; Sauron needs the Ring, destroy the Ring. This has been accompanied by a militaristic/strategic kind of thinking: the Nine Walkers against the Nine Riders. They have been reacting to Sauron and trying to defeat him in open combat. This is why Boromir (*groan, not him again* ) has fit in with the Fellowship: he’s all about this kind of action. But with the splintering of the Fellowship into other friendships I think we’re moving into a kind of middle way. Small groups of friends are neither about rugged individualism and the self-sufficiency of the single/individual hero (Boromir), nor are they dependent upon the kind of mass thinking that lies behind a larger group. The difference between a single hero (Boromir) and a heroic group (the Fellowship) is not all that great: both are in a way singular and linear, unidirectional. Boromir wants what’s good for Boromir: it’s all about the hero. The Fellowship is all about the Quest, and the individuals involved be darned. Gandalf can fall, but Aragorn is there to take over. Boromir can die, but it’s OK because he’s paying back what he owed to the Fellowship and protecting other members of it. But with friendships things are different. With the splintering of the single-issue Fellowship (all Quest all the time), there emerge friendships in which other issues which are as important as the Quest are given room and time for attention. Boromir is given his due: Gandalf was not afforded a proper mourning period and certainly no formal rite by the Fellowship, they had to keep going. Merry and Pippin are not left to torment even though, let’s face it, their fate – so far as they know at the time – is irrelevant to the War. Sam and Frodo are able to join with Gollum and forge a relationship with him. The ‘breaking’ of the Fellowship is felicitous as it frees up the heroes from the same kind of singularity of thought and intention that shackles Sauron. His one great weakness, and his only strategic error, is never being able to think that they will seek to destroy the Ring. It’s the one eventuality he never prepares for. All he can think about is the Ring. So too with the Fellowship: their sole reason for being, the only thing that forges them into a heroic company is the Ring. Sauron wants the Ring in Mordor; they want the Ring in Mordor. With this kind of imprisoning logic removed, then the friendships become free to work through issues that will prove to be of immense importance, not just because they actually help for the success of the Quest and the War (Merry and Pippin stir up the Ents; Gollum falls into the Fire) but they make that success more meaningful – or, rather, they demonstrate the meaning of that success. Good triumphs over Evil not just because one heroic company manages to defeat another evil company, but because Merry and Pippin learn the value of loyalty and oaths of allegiance, because an Elf and a Dwarf overcome their differences, because Frodo (and Sam) learn the value of Pity toward Gollum, and on. That’s why I really believe that Aragorn is the focus of this chapter far more than Boromir. Aragorn, alone of the Fellowship, realises that the time for single-mindedly pursuing the Quest is over: Quote:
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Most societies develop funeral rites that follow set traditions, or 'off-the-peg'. Same for births and marriages, etc. I don't think following a respected formula diminishes the meaning, in this instance.
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I’ve been thinking about the discussion about the nature of Amon Hen, and figured I would go to the source to see if there are any clues – by “the source” I mean, of course, philology.
In Old English, æmen means “uninhabited, desolate, desert”. An associated word is æmenne which means simply “solitude”. I think that this is pretty straightforward – Amon Sul and Amon Hen are both deserted places. More importantly, they are places of solitude, in the sense that in each there is a solitary battle or trial of the heroes (Frodo by the Witch King and then Sauron; Aragorn with himself as in each place he doubts his leadership and his decisions). The “Hen” has proved a much more interesting riddle. In Old English, hen is a form of hēan which means “lowly, despised, mean, or abject”. But it can also mean “to raise, exalt or extol” (in certain contexts, when used with the associated words hien or hyn which mean “high” or “raised”). “Hen” is also sometimes used as prefix, in which case it is being used as a form of hēanes which means simply “something high, a high place, height.” Finally, it is also associated with “hienan” which means to “fell or prostrate” or “abase, humble, insult”, “accuse or condemn.” I think it should be obvious by now the ways in which this little word hen can be applicable to the action of this chapter and the previous one. The Seat of Seeing is indeed in a high and desolate place, but it also marks a high point and a low point in the adventure. It is the place where Boromir is made abject, possibly even condemned of a crime or sin, but it is also where he is exalted and raised back up. I think that Aragorn as well goes from a low to a high, in terms of his spirits and his sense of doubt becoming a sense of heroic purpose. Perhaps Frodo, too, moves from a depressive and worried low to some kind of exalted height, when he heroically undertakes the Quest by himself. This is also a kind of ‘condemnation’ of him, however, insofar as he is now condemned to a terrible journey. So putting it together I would think that “Amon Hen” means a place of solitary trial, in which the hero is raised up and exalted from a state of lowness. So it would appear that the Seat of Seeing is dependent, in some way, upon both the individual using it and some other power which watches over the locale. It is a deserted place of solitary trial (Frodo, Boromir and Aragorn all have their individual battles with their own inner doubts and despair). At the end of these struggles, they are all of them ‘exalted’ in some way, or raised up and aided during it. Frodo is aided by Gandalf during the struggle with Sauron, but it is Sam who lifts his spirits and goes with him to Mordor. Boromir is exalted by Aragorn. All this would appear to bear out my idea that this chapter is really about Aragorn, though, insofar as he exalts himself – unlike Boromir or Frodo he does not turn to another to lift him from his abject lowness, but proceeds to become the King-Hero he is meant to be by dint of his own efforts. Perhaps this is why Frodo sees so much from the Seat, while Aragorn does not: Frodo requires and will require the aid of others for the completion of his journey, so he is ‘given’ some vision by the place, whereas Aragorn must rely upon himself – he will be alone on his individual journey, and he is sufficient to the task, so the place does not need to give him any aid in the form of a vision. He sees only what he needs to see in order to make up his own mind. Just throwing ideas around now…
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