The Lingering Darkness Planning/Discussion Thread - Page 32 - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Hilde Bracegirdle · 06-24-2005, 03:20 PM

Ho, Ho! This is fun, and I hope I don't wind up with all the balls in my court at once… Here I'm off chasing butterflies with Gilly and the post’s growing longer….

Thanks for the words of advice Pio, I will try not to hyperventilate too terribly much. I hope you find some interesting fish that are to your taste, so you don’t have a mind to throttle certain goblins or dare I say hobbits that would lag behind in dark places!

Here’s to a fit of inspiration over the weekend Ealasaide! Cheers!

piosenniel · 06-24-2005, 05:04 PM

I'm as happy as the proverbial clam at high tide - there is a new RPG opening and I'm going to try out my skills as a Dwarf.

I have to tell you - I love the name Gilly. I just got a fairy tattoo on my shoulder and named her Gilly Rowan.

. . . bad Pio! . . . devolving into chat! . . .

Hilde Bracegirdle · 06-25-2005, 05:47 AM

Very nice on both counts!

And I hope that the dwarf works out well for you. (I'm wondering if it might be a female. That would be a challenge, wouldn't it!)

Hilde Bracegirdle · 07-02-2005, 11:33 AM

Hallo Miss Ealasaide! I have finally PM'd you that post. Let me know if any changes are required. And my apologies for taking so long with it.

Ealasaide · 07-03-2005, 02:16 PM

Well done, Hilde! Your post has been placed at the very end of my last Benia post. You did a very nice job of wrapping up the loose ends.

So, aside from our final posts from each of the prinicpals, that will tie up that side of the storyline. I have left my remaining Save clear for the final posts.

Hopefully, I will have my Naiore post finished in the next day or so. I know I said that last week, but then I was instantly descended upon by a handful of friends and relations. No writing time there! Hopefully, I will fare better this week, holiday notwithstanding.

Hilde Bracegirdle · 07-03-2005, 03:39 PM

Many thanks, Ealaside! Good luck with Naiore as your holiday guest, heh, heh!

Ealasaide · 07-14-2005, 11:12 AM

So sorry to be holding things up. I really do have something in the works - honestly! It's just giving me fits...

Nerindel · 07-15-2005, 06:12 AM

Hi Just checking in to let you know I am working on something for Amandur

Eala you might want to put up a save for Naiore as in my post the plot with avanill has already occured and Vanwe is Naiores captive *eek the poor dear*

Hilde Im kinda at a loss with how to handle Menecin's reaction, so I will pm you what I have so far and you can let me know what you think the best way to handle it would be.

Hilde Bracegirdle · 07-15-2005, 10:40 AM

Alright Nerindel, I will look forward to it.

I had thought that Menecin would find the abandoned farm horse and ride back realizing he had followed a false trail. Now I am thinking I should tack this on to the last post for him. Would that work for you both?

Hilde Bracegirdle · 07-15-2005, 04:14 PM

Thanks for the PM Nerindel. It looks like I might not need to add anything on to the last one after all

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piosenniel · 07-15-2005, 05:38 PM

Let me just clarify before I start transferring to the fan fic site. I've transferred as far as post #328.

#329 is a SAVE from Ealasaide. Is that still going to be filled?

~*~ Pio

Ealasaide · 07-16-2005, 07:55 AM

Okay - my Save for Naiore is in place.

Pio - Yes, I do still plan to use that Save for final posts from that side of the story. I plan to do one from Benia.
Nerindel & Hilde, do you plan to write final posts from Gilly, Dulrain, & Toby?

Again, many apologies for my delay in getting Naiore up there.

Hilde Bracegirdle · 07-16-2005, 08:27 AM

Ealasaide & Pio, at the moment I would veture to say that a short end post for either Gilly or possibly Dulrain, would also go in that save explaining where they are going. So if after Benia's, if it is not mentioned in there, we might need to leave it briefly 'under construction'. Nerindel, I am thinking of that message that you had sent awhile back regarding Dulrain's plans for the hobbits.

Hilde Bracegirdle · 07-17-2005, 01:10 PM

Just a note to say that I have tacked on an extra paragraph to Menecin's last post. It may grow further depending on your post for Naiore Ealasaide. And before I post the next one for Menecin I will definitely be in touch with you.

piosenniel · 07-17-2005, 02:40 PM

OK!

I'll wait for the earlier SAVE to be filled with all the characters who are going to be written for.

The fanfic site is locked for deleting except by its moderators and I don't like to jam two or more posts into one space - it makes it too hard to read.

~*~ Pio

Hilde Bracegirdle · 07-18-2005, 05:00 AM

Just want to clarify a bit, Pio. We can still put multiple posts in one space on this side of the story, correct? Only when it goes to fanfic it becomes a different matter?

piosenniel · 07-18-2005, 07:27 AM

Yeah, that's right, Hilde. Multiple posts in a single space here are fine.

~*~ Pio

Hilde Bracegirdle · 08-01-2005, 03:13 PM

Just I wanted to mention that yes we are still alive, but deep in thought....

piosenniel · 08-02-2005, 01:48 AM

That's me peekin' in at the back, there

Just checking how deep . . .

~*~ Pio

Hilde Bracegirdle · 08-02-2005, 03:49 AM

*Nudge* Hey Ealasaide look, the moon is watching...

Now there is a picture!

Actually, judging by your posting time Pio, you are not far wrong. But never fear, a new day is dawning. And we shall arise go forth and write!

Ealasaide · 08-02-2005, 08:20 AM

Going forth and writing... right now!

Ealasaide · 08-03-2005, 01:31 PM

WooHoo!!! Wake up, everyone! I have finally finished (& placed) my long-overdue post for Naiore!

Please no one faint, although I would understand a few double-takes or some disbelieving rubs of the eyes...

Nerindel - please let me know if there is anything in there I need to change. I could not remember what arms Vanwe carries. The only reference I could find to her being armed was in a post as they were leaving Rivendell that mentioned her carrying a small knife. If this is not correct, please let me know & I will make the proper adjustment.

Hilde - I left a save open at the end of my post for Menecin.

Hilde Bracegirdle · 08-03-2005, 02:57 PM

Many thanks! And nice job Ealasaide!

Nerindel · 08-03-2005, 03:00 PM

No everything looks ok, great stuff Eala

Hilde Bracegirdle · 08-03-2005, 03:11 PM

Hey Ealasaide, I had refered to Vanwe having a sword in post #312. I was assuming it was Menecin's that he lent to her for that occasion. I don't know if he took it back, it wasn't mentioned. :P Sorry for the confusion.

Hilde Bracegirdle · 08-03-2005, 03:17 PM

Nerindel I see that you are online. Do you want to include a post from Vanwe in this portion?

Nerindel · 08-03-2005, 03:28 PM

no I'm happy to move on, once Menecin is in place.

I think it is good to show Vanwe's character from the prospective of the others for the moment, so that when the time comes and Vanwe is forced to act, her point of view becomes more predominent(SP?)...well thats the hope anyway

Ealasaide · 08-03-2005, 03:42 PM

Thankee & thankee!

Hilde, you said:

Quote:

I had refered to Vanwe having a sword in post #312. I was assuming it was Menecin's that he lent to her for that occasion. I don't know if he took it back, it wasn't mentioned.

Should I edit in a sword or are we assuming that Menecin took it back? What do I do??

Hilde Bracegirdle · 08-03-2005, 04:12 PM

Ergh! Help, I'm no help! That could have been anybody's sword really Ealasaide, so it could stand well as is, it's just that it will take a little while for me to get used to the idea of Menecin letting his daughter go around relatively unarmed.

Ealasaide · 08-03-2005, 04:18 PM

Would it help him to rationalize taking his sword back to know that she had had no formal training in the use of a sword? Having had some Kendo training, I can tell you, it does take a good deal of practice to handle a sword well.

As I recall, Vanwe has had no formal weapons training.

Hilde Bracegirdle · 08-03-2005, 04:33 PM

I don't know about Menecin, but it helps me, thanks Ealasaide.

And I do recall mock fencing someone myself, and having the unfortunate tendency to block blows with my wrist rather than the 'sword'!

Nerindel, I will plan to go ahead with Menecin then.

Ealasaide · 08-03-2005, 05:03 PM

Quote:

And I do recall mock fencing someone myself, and having the unfortunate tendency to block blows with my wrist rather than the 'sword'!

Ouch!

I will leave my post as is, then. Thanks!

Hilde Bracegirdle · 08-10-2005, 07:49 AM

Ealasaide I have emailed you the post for Menecin to follow Naiore's.

I am bringing this forward the outline, and have attempted to add in Nerindel's more recent thoughts. In other words, I think this is how it goes....

Please feel free to change it if I haven't got it quite right. Just thought it needed to be updated, and handy.

*********************************

End game outline

*********************************

Dúlrain Et al

1. Dúlrain with the help of Toby and Gilly go after Benia.

2. Dúlrain kills Barrold and they free Benia

3. Dúlrain confesses his love to Benia and she compassionately counsels him not to continue Kaldir's revenge and they all head back to Rivendell.

***WE ARE HERE***

4. end post

***********************************

Amandur's group

1. Amandur Et al leave Rivendell, finding Dir and discovering the fates of Kaldir and Rauthain.

2. Léspheria and Naiore sense each other’s presence and a fierce unseen battle ensues.

3. Amandur's group moves to encircle Naiore, using Léspheria as bait to draw out Naiore. Naiore plays along; falsely letting Léspheria believe her plan is working, while going after Menecin and Vanwe.

4. Naiore finds Vanwe and Avanill, killing Avanill.

5. Léspheria realizes Naiore’s intent, and cries out warning, but too late. Naiore has Vanwe and is taunting Menecin.

***WE ARE HERE***

6. Naiore is within bow shot of Léspheria, and Léspheria tries to reason with her.

7. An enraged Menecin attacks Naiore.

8. Vanwe slips from her mother's grasp into the arms of Léspheria & Vanwe's show of pity and compassion stops her father from delivering the deadly blow.

10. Desperate and filled with rage, Naiore turns on Léspheria.

11. Lespheria speaks to Naiore pointing out all that she has lost in persuit of an answer that was within her to begin with, She then turns her back on Naiore.

12. Naiore incensed and blaming Léspheria for Vanwe's pity strikes out at Léspheria.

13. Naiore is killed!

11. End post.

Ealasaide · 08-10-2005, 08:13 AM

Hilde - Your post is in place. Great stuff! Also, thanks for bringing the outline forward. That will be very helpful.

Nerindel - do you want to expand your post to respond to Hilde's post before I continue with Naiore? Please let me know!

Nerindel · 08-19-2005, 05:30 AM

ok my last post has been edited keeping the boys busy so the ladies might chat

Hilde Bracegirdle · 08-20-2005, 10:06 AM

Ok, I have made a few changes to the outline so that Menecin and Amandur will wrapped up 'discussing' matters, while Lespheria, Naiore & Vanwe carry on their own conversation. If I've got something muddled, please let me know so I can correct it.

Meanwhile, I will put up a save for Menecin, so that I won't hold you guys up.

Hilde Bracegirdle · 08-23-2005, 03:25 PM

Quote:

'Work of the enemy' said Gandalf. 'Such deeds he loves: friend at war with friend; loyality divided in the confusion of hearts.'

Return of the King 'The Pyre of Denethor'

Well Menecin is out there, now literally.

If either of you need me to change something please drop me a PM. Nerindel, I hope that Amandur's placement is OK. At first I had him push past Menecin, but I thought that maybe it would be premature.

Nerindel · 08-30-2005, 04:58 AM

ok the fire of vengance now burns within Léspheria

she needs answers, hopefully those answers will let the more neutral elven healer side of her nature shine through as she trys to reason with Naiore. Ealasaide I will pm you with something I think might help Lespheria see past her hatred.

if anything needs changed please let me know.

Ealasaide · 09-01-2005, 10:50 AM

Looks good, Hilde & Nerindel. I'm working on something. Hopefully, I can finish & put it on the thread in the next day or two.

Hilde Bracegirdle · 09-09-2005, 10:09 AM

Nice post Ealasaide!!!

Nerindel, do you need to post in here, or should I go ahead with Menecin? I was planning to cover the attack and Naiore's release of Vanwe in this next one.

06-24-2005, 05:04 PM	#1242
piosenniel Desultory Dwimmerlaik Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Pickin' flowers with Bill the Cat..... Posts: 7,779	I'm as happy as the proverbial clam at high tide - there is a new RPG opening and I'm going to try out my skills as a Dwarf. I have to tell you - I love the name Gilly. I just got a fairy tattoo on my shoulder and named her Gilly Rowan. . . . bad Pio! . . . devolving into chat! . . . __________________ Eldest, that’s what I am . . . I knew the dark under the stars when it was fearless - before the Dark Lord came from Outside.

07-15-2005, 06:12 AM	#1248
Nerindel Spirited Weaver of Fates Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: In an endless sea of dreams! Posts: 827	Hi Just checking in to let you know I am working on something for Amandur Eala you might want to put up a save for Naiore as in my post the plot with avanill has already occured and Vanwe is Naiores captive eek the poor dear Hilde Im kinda at a loss with how to handle Menecin's reaction, so I will pm you what I have so far and you can let me know what you think the best way to handle it would be. __________________ "Don't part with your illusions. When they are gone you may still exist, but you have ceased to live" ~ Mark Twain.

07-15-2005, 05:38 PM	#1251
piosenniel Desultory Dwimmerlaik Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Pickin' flowers with Bill the Cat..... Posts: 7,779	Let me just clarify before I start transferring to the fan fic site. I've transferred as far as post #328. #329 is a SAVE from Ealasaide. Is that still going to be filled? ~*~ Pio __________________ Eldest, that’s what I am . . . I knew the dark under the stars when it was fearless - before the Dark Lord came from Outside.

07-16-2005, 08:27 AM	#1253
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Ealasaide & Pio, at the moment I would veture to say that a short end post for either Gilly or possibly Dulrain, would also go in that save explaining where they are going. So if after Benia's, if it is not mentioned in there, we might need to leave it briefly 'under construction'. Nerindel, I am thinking of that message that you had sent awhile back regarding Dulrain's plans for the hobbits. Last edited by Hilde Bracegirdle; 07-16-2005 at 08:30 AM.

07-17-2005, 02:40 PM	#1255
piosenniel Desultory Dwimmerlaik Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Pickin' flowers with Bill the Cat..... Posts: 7,779	OK! I'll wait for the earlier SAVE to be filled with all the characters who are going to be written for. The fanfic site is locked for deleting except by its moderators and I don't like to jam two or more posts into one space - it makes it too hard to read. ~*~ Pio __________________ Eldest, that’s what I am . . . I knew the dark under the stars when it was fearless - before the Dark Lord came from Outside.

06-24-2005, 03:20 PM	#1241
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Ho, Ho! This is fun, and I hope I don't wind up with all the balls in my court at once… Here I'm off chasing butterflies with Gilly and the post’s growing longer…. Thanks for the words of advice Pio, I will try not to hyperventilate too terribly much. I hope you find some interesting fish that are to your taste, so you don’t have a mind to throttle certain goblins or dare I say hobbits that would lag behind in dark places! Here’s to a fit of inspiration over the weekend Ealasaide! Cheers!

06-25-2005, 05:47 AM	#1243
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Very nice on both counts! And I hope that the dwarf works out well for you. (I'm wondering if it might be a female. That would be a challenge, wouldn't it!)

07-02-2005, 11:33 AM	#1244
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Hallo Miss Ealasaide! I have finally PM'd you that post. Let me know if any changes are required. And my apologies for taking so long with it.

07-03-2005, 02:16 PM	#1245
Ealasaide Shadow of Tyrn Gorthad Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: The Fencing Lyst Posts: 810	Well done, Hilde! Your post has been placed at the very end of my last Benia post. You did a very nice job of wrapping up the loose ends. So, aside from our final posts from each of the prinicpals, that will tie up that side of the storyline. I have left my remaining Save clear for the final posts. Hopefully, I will have my Naiore post finished in the next day or so. I know I said that last week, but then I was instantly descended upon by a handful of friends and relations. No writing time there! Hopefully, I will fare better this week, holiday notwithstanding.

07-03-2005, 03:39 PM	#1246
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Many thanks, Ealaside! Good luck with Naiore as your holiday guest, heh, heh!

07-14-2005, 11:12 AM	#1247
Ealasaide Shadow of Tyrn Gorthad Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: The Fencing Lyst Posts: 810	So sorry to be holding things up. I really do have something in the works - honestly! It's just giving me fits...

07-15-2005, 10:40 AM	#1249
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Alright Nerindel, I will look forward to it. I had thought that Menecin would find the abandoned farm horse and ride back realizing he had followed a false trail. Now I am thinking I should tack this on to the last post for him. Would that work for you both?

07-15-2005, 04:14 PM	#1250
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Thanks for the PM Nerindel. It looks like I might not need to add anything on to the last one after all .

07-16-2005, 07:55 AM	#1252
Ealasaide Shadow of Tyrn Gorthad Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: The Fencing Lyst Posts: 810	Okay - my Save for Naiore is in place. Pio - Yes, I do still plan to use that Save for final posts from that side of the story. I plan to do one from Benia. Nerindel & Hilde, do you plan to write final posts from Gilly, Dulrain, & Toby? Again, many apologies for my delay in getting Naiore up there.

07-17-2005, 01:10 PM	#1254
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Just a note to say that I have tacked on an extra paragraph to Menecin's last post. It may grow further depending on your post for Naiore Ealasaide. And before I post the next one for Menecin I will definitely be in touch with you.

07-18-2005, 05:00 AM	#1256
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Just want to clarify a bit, Pio. We can still put multiple posts in one space on this side of the story, correct? Only when it goes to fanfic it becomes a different matter?

07-18-2005, 07:27 AM	#1257
piosenniel Desultory Dwimmerlaik Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Pickin' flowers with Bill the Cat..... Posts: 7,779	Yeah, that's right, Hilde. Multiple posts in a single space here are fine. ~*~ Pio __________________ Eldest, that’s what I am . . . I knew the dark under the stars when it was fearless - before the Dark Lord came from Outside.

08-01-2005, 03:13 PM	#1258
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Just I wanted to mention that yes we are still alive, but deep in thought....

08-02-2005, 01:48 AM	#1259
piosenniel Desultory Dwimmerlaik Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Pickin' flowers with Bill the Cat..... Posts: 7,779	That's me peekin' in at the back, there Just checking how deep . . . ~*~ Pio

08-02-2005, 03:49 AM	#1260
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Nudge Hey Ealasaide look, the moon is watching... Now there is a picture! Actually, judging by your posting time Pio, you are not far wrong. But never fear, a new day is dawning. And we shall arise go forth and write! Last edited by Hilde Bracegirdle; 08-02-2005 at 03:53 AM.

08-02-2005, 08:20 AM	#1261
Ealasaide Shadow of Tyrn Gorthad Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: The Fencing Lyst Posts: 810	Going forth and writing... right now!

08-03-2005, 01:31 PM	#1262
Ealasaide Shadow of Tyrn Gorthad Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: The Fencing Lyst Posts: 810	WooHoo!!! Wake up, everyone! I have finally finished (& placed) my long-overdue post for Naiore! Please no one faint, although I would understand a few double-takes or some disbelieving rubs of the eyes... Nerindel - please let me know if there is anything in there I need to change. I could not remember what arms Vanwe carries. The only reference I could find to her being armed was in a post as they were leaving Rivendell that mentioned her carrying a small knife. If this is not correct, please let me know & I will make the proper adjustment. Hilde - I left a save open at the end of my post for Menecin.

08-03-2005, 02:57 PM	#1263
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Many thanks! And nice job Ealasaide!

08-03-2005, 03:00 PM	#1264
Nerindel Spirited Weaver of Fates Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: In an endless sea of dreams! Posts: 827	No everything looks ok, great stuff Eala

08-03-2005, 03:11 PM	#1265
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Hey Ealasaide, I had refered to Vanwe having a sword in post #312. I was assuming it was Menecin's that he lent to her for that occasion. I don't know if he took it back, it wasn't mentioned. :P Sorry for the confusion.

08-03-2005, 03:17 PM	#1266
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Nerindel I see that you are online. Do you want to include a post from Vanwe in this portion?

08-03-2005, 03:28 PM	#1267
Nerindel Spirited Weaver of Fates Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: In an endless sea of dreams! Posts: 827	no I'm happy to move on, once Menecin is in place. I think it is good to show Vanwe's character from the prospective of the others for the moment, so that when the time comes and Vanwe is forced to act, her point of view becomes more predominent(SP?)...well thats the hope anyway

08-03-2005, 04:12 PM	#1269
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Ergh! Help, I'm no help! That could have been anybody's sword really Ealasaide, so it could stand well as is, it's just that it will take a little while for me to get used to the idea of Menecin letting his daughter go around relatively unarmed.

08-03-2005, 04:18 PM	#1270
Ealasaide Shadow of Tyrn Gorthad Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: The Fencing Lyst Posts: 810	Would it help him to rationalize taking his sword back to know that she had had no formal training in the use of a sword? Having had some Kendo training, I can tell you, it does take a good deal of practice to handle a sword well. As I recall, Vanwe has had no formal weapons training.

08-03-2005, 04:33 PM	#1271
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	I don't know about Menecin, but it helps me, thanks Ealasaide. And I do recall mock fencing someone myself, and having the unfortunate tendency to block blows with my wrist rather than the 'sword'! Nerindel, I will plan to go ahead with Menecin then.

08-10-2005, 07:49 AM	#1273
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Ealasaide I have emailed you the post for Menecin to follow Naiore's. I am bringing this forward the outline, and have attempted to add in Nerindel's more recent thoughts. In other words, I think this is how it goes.... Please feel free to change it if I haven't got it quite right. Just thought it needed to be updated, and handy. ******************************* End game outline ***************************** Dúlrain Et al 1. Dúlrain with the help of Toby and Gilly go after Benia. 2. Dúlrain kills Barrold and they free Benia 3. Dúlrain confesses his love to Benia and she compassionately counsels him not to continue Kaldir's revenge and they all head back to Rivendell. WE ARE HERE 4. end post ******************************* Amandur's group 1. Amandur Et al leave Rivendell, finding Dir and discovering the fates of Kaldir and Rauthain. 2. Léspheria and Naiore sense each other’s presence and a fierce unseen battle ensues. 3. Amandur's group moves to encircle Naiore, using Léspheria as bait to draw out Naiore. Naiore plays along; falsely letting Léspheria believe her plan is working, while going after Menecin and Vanwe. 4. Naiore finds Vanwe and Avanill, killing Avanill. 5. Léspheria realizes Naiore’s intent, and cries out warning, but too late. Naiore has Vanwe and is taunting Menecin. WE ARE HERE** 6. Naiore is within bow shot of Léspheria, and Léspheria tries to reason with her. 7. An enraged Menecin attacks Naiore. 8. Vanwe slips from her mother's grasp into the arms of Léspheria & Vanwe's show of pity and compassion stops her father from delivering the deadly blow. 10. Desperate and filled with rage, Naiore turns on Léspheria. 11. Lespheria speaks to Naiore pointing out all that she has lost in persuit of an answer that was within her to begin with, She then turns her back on Naiore. 12. Naiore incensed and blaming Léspheria for Vanwe's pity strikes out at Léspheria. 13. Naiore is killed! 11. End post. Last edited by Hilde Bracegirdle; 08-20-2005 at 10:00 AM.

08-10-2005, 08:13 AM	#1274
Ealasaide Shadow of Tyrn Gorthad Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: The Fencing Lyst Posts: 810	Hilde - Your post is in place. Great stuff! Also, thanks for bringing the outline forward. That will be very helpful. Nerindel - do you want to expand your post to respond to Hilde's post before I continue with Naiore? Please let me know!

08-19-2005, 05:30 AM	#1275
Nerindel Spirited Weaver of Fates Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: In an endless sea of dreams! Posts: 827	ok my last post has been edited keeping the boys busy so the ladies might chat

08-20-2005, 10:06 AM	#1276
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Ok, I have made a few changes to the outline so that Menecin and Amandur will wrapped up 'discussing' matters, while Lespheria, Naiore & Vanwe carry on their own conversation. If I've got something muddled, please let me know so I can correct it. Meanwhile, I will put up a save for Menecin, so that I won't hold you guys up.

08-30-2005, 04:58 AM	#1278
Nerindel Spirited Weaver of Fates Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: In an endless sea of dreams! Posts: 827	ok the fire of vengance now burns within Léspheria she needs answers, hopefully those answers will let the more neutral elven healer side of her nature shine through as she trys to reason with Naiore. Ealasaide I will pm you with something I think might help Lespheria see past her hatred. if anything needs changed please let me know.