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06-17-2002, 11:09 PM
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Shade of Carn Dűm
Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: The Halls of Montezuma, and the Shores of Tripoli
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Thinhyandoiel, what do you mean not good? it was superb! One of the better ones.
When is BW gonna read his mailbox inscription!?!?
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06-17-2002, 11:58 PM
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Spirit of a Warrior
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Wandering
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Wow Yerniel, excellent poem. I love it.
Everyone here is so talented. I feel blessed to be among all of you.
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06-18-2002, 12:02 AM
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Desultory Dwimmerlaik
Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: Pickin' flowers with Bill the Cat.....
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Pipeweed O's
'gainst a blue, cloudless sky, Cold pints from the Green Dragon -- Summer in the Shire
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06-18-2002, 12:10 AM
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Visionary Spirit
Join Date: May 2002
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Lothlórien
Trees dance in freedom. Elven leaves weave, somersault, shimmer mallorn gold. Gandalf the Grey |
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06-18-2002, 06:58 AM
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Registered User
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Sitting in front of my preferred world....
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My very feeble attempt now has a second verse but the thread seems to have gone (?) so here it is.......
The Legend of the Ring "Some time ago in a forgotten place A dark lord dreamed to govern evey race, And in order to gain all the land The dark lord created a golden band. A dwarven seven and a mortal nine An elven three with powers divine, But twenty was the final score One more was forged tells ancient lore. One to rule above all the rest And put each creature to his test. Until an alliance of elves and men Came face to face with his dark ten, Nine mortal men doomed to die And the dark lord to rule them all on high. The battle raged as they fell one by one Until the dark lord's deed was done, But elves resisted and men wouldn't crack Until Isildur fell upon his back. He lifted up his father's blade And with that blow the rings power unmade, Sauron defeated but spirit not gone The legend of the ring would forever live on." N.R. Stephen 2002 [ June 19, 2002: Message edited by: Gorothlammothiel ] |
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06-18-2002, 07:19 AM
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Cryptic Aura
Join Date: May 2002
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It is good to see your Lothlorien haiku here, Gandalf_theGrey. Have you ever written a poem about the Shire?
piosenniel, the wistful bliss of your poem reminds me of a longing expressed by a friend on a Hobbiton RP thread last summer. She had wanted it always to be July in Hobbiton. *skips away with more poems to put in her 'commonplace' book* Bethberry
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06-18-2002, 12:09 PM
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Visionary Spirit
Join Date: May 2002
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Thank you, Bethberry.
I always like that prism-haiku of yours as well. As for the Shire poem, I'm waiting for the right time to bring it out. Thank you for asking about it. Gandalf the Grey |
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06-19-2002, 09:38 PM
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Desultory Dwimmerlaik
Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: Pickin' flowers with Bill the Cat.....
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Leaves crunching under foot -
Hidden mushrooms scent the air! Autumn in the Shire.
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