I made a poem!!!!! - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Morgoth Bauglir · 08-15-2002, 03:35 PM

i couldnt find the poem thread in books soo...

this may not be that great but i thought i had to post it, i couldnt sleep last night it was really wierd

on a quest
hung by a string
they try their best
to destroy this thing

more powerful than all
lovely to behold
this thing is very small
a menace of old

woo hoo! oohh how bout this!?

if u can, keep on adding on to the poem,and we will make a long continuous poem.

anyway i hope u like it lol

Arwen Imladris · 08-15-2002, 04:37 PM

Hey! That is pretty good! The only thing that I would do different is say the ring instead of this thing. Keep going! [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img]

Tigerlily Gamgee · 08-15-2002, 04:53 PM

OK, here's a shot at a continuation...

On through the dark
With evil near
They wait for any
Hope to appear

Four friends they are
Nine they become
The Fellowship created
The journey begun

Eruwen · 08-17-2002, 05:58 PM

He he!! That is cool. And Tigerlily, that is very deep. But I might try at this. {I just started writing poems last year, and I'm working on my creativity.}

The road was long
The journey cold
But the evil helps
Their friendship to hold

With the loss of two
The Fellowhip breaks
And the trip to Mordor
Only two take

With darkness ahead
And home behind
They go on to battle
Of every which kind

The evil grows
And the terror awaits
As with a new companion
They arrive at the gates

That is all I have. I have to go eat dinner. I'm not too good. But I did my best.

08-15-2002, 03:35 PM	#1
Morgoth Bauglir Shade of Carn Dûm Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 252	I made a poem!!!!! i couldnt find the poem thread in books soo... this may not be that great but i thought i had to post it, i couldnt sleep last night it was really wierd on a quest hung by a string they try their best to destroy this thing more powerful than all lovely to behold this thing is very small a menace of old woo hoo! oohh how bout this!? if u can, keep on adding on to the poem,and we will make a long continuous poem. anyway i hope u like it lol

08-15-2002, 04:37 PM	#2
Arwen Imladris Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: In a box with a fox Posts: 1,347	Hey! That is pretty good! The only thing that I would do different is say the ring instead of this thing. Keep going! [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] __________________ "Wake up! Wake up! Wake up, sleepies, we must go, yes, we must go at once."

08-15-2002, 04:53 PM	#3
Tigerlily Gamgee Hostess of Spirits Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Meduseld Posts: 1,055	OK, here's a shot at a continuation... On through the dark With evil near They wait for any Hope to appear Four friends they are Nine they become The Fellowship created The journey begun __________________ ~ ExerciseJunky.com (Hobbits fitness of choice!)~ ~Lady of Rohan: An Eowyn Fansite ~ ~The NEW/OLD Barrow Downs Photo Page~

08-17-2002, 05:58 PM	#4
Eruwen Registered User Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 892	He he!! That is cool. And Tigerlily, that is very deep. But I might try at this. {I just started writing poems last year, and I'm working on my creativity.} The road was long The journey cold But the evil helps Their friendship to hold With the loss of two The Fellowhip breaks And the trip to Mordor Only two take With darkness ahead And home behind They go on to battle Of every which kind The evil grows And the terror awaits As with a new companion They arrive at the gates That is all I have. I have to go eat dinner. I'm not too good. But I did my best.