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#441 |
The Melody of Misery
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: The Island of Conclusions (You get there by jumping!)...
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Hey Tara,
I did a lot that involved actions from both Laurel and Cuor in my post. If any of them seem out of character or not cool with you let me know and I'll edit gladly. Also, I was going to continue on with Laurel using the daggers to kill Cuor, but trailed off as I wasn't sure if you had special plans with Cuor's death (he is dying, right?). ![]() Kryssal, Great posts! ![]() -Aylwen
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#442 |
Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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I second that!
*applauds* I have posted Cuor dying, and while editing the last posts I made, put Annunfuin in there. My idea on what happens next is this. We carry the bodies of the fallen to Taralphiel's house. From there Im not so sure. Do you think Leena should go back to Gondor? And what of Jesslyn? Im not sure it makes sense to bury them there...and from what I remember, Thagon's funeral was not actually posted. After that, we'll have a happy mopping up! : ![]() |
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#443 |
Wight
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: I be one of those hick Utahns.
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We could have Thagon's body simply decomposing (or lying if it sounds better
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#444 |
Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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hmm...
Well, I dont know if Thagon would be decomposing.... Im no biology student though ![]() I think Ill have Gellick take them back to Gondor together, that sounds all nicey-like ![]() |
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#445 |
Wight
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: I be one of those hick Utahns.
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Tara me baps, as soon as someone dies they start to decompose. Starting with the bacteria in the stomach to start eating all the organs. Basically, your body eats itself from the inside out, slowly. Just in case you wanted to know.
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#446 |
Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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*reads*
*pauses* They'll be buried.....quickly!!!!! ![]() Aylwen: Do you wish to take the stage next? ![]() Then I shall post Gita's end. She stumbles in on the wrong Elf ![]() |
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#447 |
Wight
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: I be one of those hick Utahns.
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Which Elf would this be? Rud? Or one of mine? lol
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#448 |
Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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*giggles*
Rud, yes. I wanted him to play some part in it ![]() |
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#449 |
The Melody of Misery
Join Date: Aug 2002
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I'll try and put a post up tonight or sometime tomorrow. If either of you want to post before then, feel free and I'll just add it to my post.
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#450 |
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Thanks for the posts Aylwen
I made a reply. I will go further with the post if you give the word. As far as Cartil and Laurel talking to Taralphiel. From there we bury the dead, and close it all up |
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#451 |
Wight
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: I be one of those hick Utahns.
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I personally didn't want to dwell on the fields too much. I hope it's ok what I did, if not, I can always edit/delete. I'll write a much longer post soon, but school starts again soon and I need to write some papers. I'm thinking I'll get one up tomorrow.
Also, Aylwen, Annunfuin is a male human, I was confused with: by the Elf's sudden change "Cartil," Annunfuin began, but her voice stopped See you in the posts ![]() ~Kryss |
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#452 |
The Melody of Misery
Join Date: Aug 2002
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Ooopsies.
![]() -Aylwen
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#453 |
Wight
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: I be one of those hick Utahns.
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Yes, yes Tara, I am a bit evil, but if you don't want Taralphiel to speak I'll edit.....but I thought it was kinda natural for her to do so. Anyhow, any problems, let me know.
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#454 |
Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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Perfect Kryssal! No changes needed!
I have put Rudhchamions two cents in there Aylwen, I didnt want to control Cartil all that much, so I hope my post is okay. Plase let me know if you wish to put a response in ie will Cartil stay, does he want Jesslyn to be buried there.... Also Kryssal, will Lanaey be staying for a small while? And do you wish to put that in? Annanoldowen will head off home, as will Herebrand and Ohtaredan and Gellick. They will be put in my last post, so you do not have to worrry about them. Ill also take care of Gorath and Galain. Almost done!!!! ![]() |
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#455 |
Wight
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: I be one of those hick Utahns.
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Sure, sure, now you take them all off my hands
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#456 |
Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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eek! Sorry for my absense. Im just getting used to a new Year of University
Aylwen: Do you want to post a reply? Its fine if you dont, just let me know if you have any preferences of how you want Cartil to end up, and Ill chuck it in Kryss: Do you want to post for them? *giggles* I just felt bad that you had to post for so many characters! |
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#457 |
The Melody of Misery
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I'd post, but I don't want to make you guys wait for me until I get time to post. I just don't want to hold you up, so if you guys want to wrap up everything in the next two, maybe three days, go ahead. I just want Cartil to end up staying with Laurel.
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#458 |
Wight
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Nah, you'd know better than me what they'd do anyway. I will put them in saying a goodbye to Lanaey or vice versa probably. I'm just waiting for Taralphiel to give her speach thingy to the people at the new buriel grounds.
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#459 |
Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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Ill post Cartil going to the house, and the speech
Kryss: Are the brothers there? When I figure out what they are up to Ill have Rudhchamion tell them he is off, and they can follow if they like I also cant remember where Annanoldowen is.... Im putting the speech in now, but its an incomplete post Id like you to post before I close it up Aylwen. I dont want to wrap up Cartil's story, as I dont think I'd do it justice ![]() |
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#460 |
Wight
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: I be one of those hick Utahns.
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Gorath is recovering in the house.
At the moment, Annanodolwen is with Lanaey at the speach, she'll go back to helping the wounded I'd imagine. Galain is seeing to the burning of the bodies. I left out him breaking down tents and stuff because I figured the settlers would want to go through and take anything that could help them. I know they probably wouldn't want to, but it is practical since their village was hurt so badly. I'll bring back Galain, who will be with his brother. I can write out their leaving an' all if you like. I'll post tomorrow. |
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#461 |
Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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Okay... *thinks*
Ill have Rudhchamion visit Gorath tell them as soon as he is fit that tey will leave. I was thinking that maybe by that time Annanoldowen would have done her job and leave with the brothers and Rudhchamion as well. Sound good? Im adding to my post now. |
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#462 |
Wight
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: I be one of those hick Utahns.
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Lets get this finished
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#463 |
Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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I have stuff to study for as well...blergh....
Well Kryss, your characters are almost finished, arent they? I think one more post aught to do it *nods* Aylwen: Could you post for Cartil? Make it your last if you like, and then Ill wrap it up with a post for Laurel and Taralphiel. Oh, and if I go missing for a few days, please forgive me! Compie is on the fritz :P |
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#464 |
The Melody of Misery
Join Date: Aug 2002
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No problemo. I'll get one up today, but there's not much for finishing Cartil's part in this story, so it might be a bit short.
![]() -Aylwen Edit: Yup, I posted. It's quite short, I apologize. Cartil has left the building. ![]()
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#465 |
Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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Thankyou so much Aylwen, your post wasnt to short. Just perfect!
Its been a pleasure, and thanks for all your help! Kryss: Do you have any more to add? |
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#466 |
Wight
Join Date: Mar 2003
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Just to see the Elves off I suppose and starting a new town (promising type entry from Laurel or Taralphiel I'd suspect)
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#467 |
Wight
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don't mean to be a pooper, but wouldn't Cartil take his sister home first? Then return to Swan Wood?
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#468 |
Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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hmm....you have a point *noddity*
How does this sound? In my last post I have Laurel leaving with Cartil to take Jess home? Thinking about it, they would need help, so Annunfuin would come along? How would they do something like that? A cart I suppose...... Thanks for that Kryss! Do you want to put the next post in? |
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#469 |
The Melody of Misery
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Heee, Cartil has so little respect for the dead!
![]() ![]() Wonderful point, Kryss. Sounds fine though, Tara... Oh, and I never got to say my farewells! 'Twas a pleasure playing with everyone, and I hope to RP with you guys again! Bravo, for us hanging in there till the end, even when everyone else dropped out! Yay! ![]() -Aylwen
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#470 |
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Sure, I'll put the next one in. I'll have Laurel and Taralphiel ask to help be in charge of rebuilding (if that's cool, I'll have it they've heard she's planning on staying anyway). Then that'll give Laurel the opportunity to go with Cartil.
For Jess, in a closed coffin would be best. Also might want to load that puppy with flowers to help temporarily. I can put that in as well. Aylwen, thank you for sticking it through with us ![]() Anyhow, for my post I'll put in Lanaey ordering some willing helpers to go around and loot the deserted encampment and such and have Laurel and Taralphiel come up and make their request for her to formerly help. Then Laurel will tell of her plans and such. We'll pack up Jesslyn and Lanaey will say something then I'll cut off so that you can finish the talk and then head off with any messages you want Tara. Sound good? |
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#471 |
Wight
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Once I get the go ahead, I'll post
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#472 |
Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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*begs forgiveness from Kryss*
Yes, most certainly! Go ahead! Im sorry, I have had a bad weekend, and a worse week ahead *giggles* You actually love this story that much? I thought you would have been shockingly annoyed with me by now!!! :P |
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#473 |
Wight
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annoyed? I'll post within the next few days. If anything, I'm annoyed with all the people who couldn't stick it through. If you know what I mean
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#474 |
Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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*sniffles and applauds*
BRILLIANT! *grins* that was so cute!!! Now lets see what ending I can come up with.... |
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#475 |
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And so ends our story, Kryssal!
I really considered you a co-manager in all of this!! You really helped me keep this alive, and now we have a happy ending to show for it! *huggles you tight* Thakyou to every writer who made an impact on this, we are grateful! |
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#476 |
Desultory Dwimmerlaik
Join Date: Mar 2002
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Well done, Tara, Kryssal, and Aylwen!
~*~ Pio ![]()
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#477 |
Cryptic Aura
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Indeed, well done and a course well-stayed, Writers of the Mark.
And now, ... to Elvenhome.
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