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10-04-2006, 06:10 AM
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Shade of Carn Dûm
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Two in Rivendell
Now, there is no place for poems, and I cannot start a new thread in the place where I think it could go, I will post it here, even though I expect it to get moved. (was that a run-on sentence? whatever
 )Anyway, I entered a poetry contest, and the poem I entered was one that I wrote my freshman year. So I polished it up, and sent it in. And SHAZAM!!! It made it to the semifinals! This is a copy of it. It is published at poetry.com. Two in Rivendell He descends from Arathorn She is an elf of Elrond''s descent He is Aragorn, battle tested but worn She is Arwen, fairest elf in lament His great sword Anduril has pierced many foes Her wisdom and knowledge surpass all land''s lore He has fought evil till the midnight crow crows For her land, her Rivendell, which she lives for A man and elf, a very odd couple Arwen the fair, Aragorn the Strider Together in calm times, love is quite supple Together they have fought the nine dark riders. Even when Gandalf is gone, and Sauron sees light, In Rivendell, they will dwell through the night. Kevin Whinnery Copyright ©2006 Kevin Whinnery Not the best, but I did alright for my first poem, I think! 
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10-04-2006, 07:41 AM
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Silver in My Silent Heart
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Yea, not bad not bad! Works much better than the stuff I write. Simple, but if this is only your first poem, you're doing well.
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10-04-2006, 12:25 PM
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Shade of Carn Dûm
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Thanks, Volo! I really appreciate it! Maybe this can be the new poetry thread. (there is no place in fanfic for poems)
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10-04-2006, 05:16 PM
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Haunting Spirit
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i thought it was good better than what i could do
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10-05-2006, 05:21 AM
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Shade of Carn Dûm
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Thanks, doom_hammer. I cant help but find some of the lines I wrote kind of weak, but I will polish it up again maybe.
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11-20-2006, 11:37 AM
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Shade of Carn Dûm
Join Date: May 2006
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official poetry thread
Well, I hope to post one of my new poems in here soon, it is one I am using in my book (which is also, in very, very deep construction). Hopefully I can polish it up within the month...but I am not making an obligation
(I forget )
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