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burrahobbit · 11-13-2002, 08:58 PM

japanese poems
today have gained my fancy
now i share my joy

tolkien's world, nature
these haikus must have them both
because i say so

real haikus, proper
they must have some nature theme
wind blows on cold plain

it shan't be hard, though
middle-earth is full of it
all is in nature

and commentary
dont do it in prose
or ill make you pay

on that very note
my haikus proper commence
right after this one

HELM'S DEEP
here the dead mount high
the forest overtakes all
only wind remains

[ November 13, 2002: Message edited by: burrahobbit ]

11-13-2002, 08:58 PM	#1
burrahobbit Hidden Spirit Join Date: May 2000 Location: Oklahoma Posts: 1,424	HAIKU japanese poems today have gained my fancy now i share my joy tolkien's world, nature these haikus must have them both because i say so real haikus, proper they must have some nature theme wind blows on cold plain it shan't be hard, though middle-earth is full of it all is in nature and commentary dont do it in prose or ill make you pay on that very note my haikus proper commence right after this one HELM'S DEEP here the dead mount high the forest overtakes all only wind remains [ November 13, 2002: Message edited by: burrahobbit ] __________________ What's a burrahobbit got to do with my pocket, anyways?