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01-18-2009, 03:24 PM | #1321 | |
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01-18-2009, 06:13 PM | #1322 |
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Phew. That was epic. I hope I represented Eodwine and Degas well, LMP and Fea.
If you'd like Thornden to be included, LMP, I could try to go back and edit him into the earlier fights somehow. Just let me know.
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01-18-2009, 08:12 PM | #1323 |
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Heck, why not? Go ahead and add him. I never did add his name to list - I thought that we had an even number of people for the game, so I didn't want to mess things up. But in your post it said it was odd, so to make it an even match, go ahead and add him! He should be in it anyway.
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01-18-2009, 10:40 PM | #1324 |
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Wow-
That was fantastic. Great writing, Gwath!
I was gasping when the limp proved to be feigned - "He was faking it!" I never once felt like Degas wasn't very much himself, and that's an impressive feat, to take somebody's character and render them so well that the writer and creator feels like it's totally natural. Great job. Loved it.
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01-19-2009, 12:37 AM | #1325 |
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Thanks, I'm glad Degas was true to life.
I just read the post straight through for the first time and found that it's really quite exciting!
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01-19-2009, 10:51 AM | #1326 |
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That was quite handily done, Gwath! Thanks for taking time out from your busy drama producing schedule to do it. And you handled Eodwine's personality quite well, especially at the end. Now, flush from having his head removed from his neck --- at least so it would have been if it had been in earnest (pardon the pun) --- he is ready to have his widowerhood removed and let the nuptials begin!
As to that, I like all 6 points of Groin's wedding info post - they'll just have to be adapted to Eorling and Scarburg circumstances. I'll bet Harreld has a sword he can "sell" or offer to Degas and Saeryn that will serve as the gift sword. In fact, that might be a fun couple of posts to write, getting that all situated. Consider this: Saeryn has not yet even thought of bride price and dowry concerns, and I'm expecting her to think of them at some point quite soon... |
01-19-2009, 10:59 AM | #1327 | |
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01-19-2009, 10:59 AM | #1328 | |
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And, honestly, that post was a HECK of a lot of fun to write. I wasn't sure at all how it would go - I just sat down and started writing out the fight, blow by blow, and, man, did it turn out to be exciting! I felt like I was one (or all?) of the characters, I felt all their adrenaline and surprise and everything. And since I was writing straight through from scratch (which took about two and a half hours), the excitement kept me from getting bored or having to get up and take a break.
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01-19-2009, 03:42 PM | #1329 | |
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Gwath, that was an exciting ending for an exciting game to conclude a perfect day! Well done.
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01-19-2009, 06:21 PM | #1330 | |
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01-20-2009, 05:50 AM | #1331 |
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Gwath, I loved your post, the end especially. Brilliant. And Groin, I loved your post too - but that might be partly because I just love Matrim, regardless of who's writing him he's always awesome. (And I can rep neither of you right now, because I've been spreading so much reputation lately...)
I'll try to write for Modtryth and/or Cnebba sometime this week.
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01-20-2009, 05:59 AM | #1332 |
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"....fowl play.... So, Groin, he thinks birds were involved? I think you want foul.
I hope Lhuna posts soon for Randvér, because any altercations involving he and Ginna ought to occur before the wedding. |
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01-22-2009, 11:06 AM | #1335 |
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Oh, please LET'S have it today! Please, please, please!
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01-22-2009, 02:57 PM | #1336 |
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Then let's bump the old man off! I'm sure Gwath wouldn't mind having Crabannan doing that, would Gwath?
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01-22-2009, 05:44 PM | #1337 | |
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01-23-2009, 11:52 AM | #1339 |
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Goodness, I'm so sorry guys. I've honestly been trying to craft a post, but this had been a really crazy week (and it's not yet over). Will you give me until Monday? Please please?
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01-23-2009, 01:15 PM | #1340 | |
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Why not actually have it come to blows and have Crabannan be justified in delivering a thrashing? That would be an interesting twist - the redemption of Crabannan's brawling nature. Well, I'll have to at least keep that in mind for the future.
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01-24-2009, 11:42 AM | #1341 |
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Okay! I put up a post that Nogrod and I wrote about the boys and the fathers (and older brother).
Nogrod, if you want anything changed, let me know. As you see, I kind of mixed things up in the beginning, putting stuff you had written intermixed with what I had first written. Tell me if I got anything wrong. -- Folwren
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01-26-2009, 03:47 PM | #1342 | |
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Let's then continue, with the wedding I presume? Anyone feeling like writing the ceremonies? Maybe someone involved in the actual wedding?
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01-26-2009, 05:22 PM | #1343 |
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I believe we're waiting to give Lhuna a chance to write something. She asked for until Monday. I am anxious to see if Randver returns.
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01-26-2009, 05:37 PM | #1344 |
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Sorry, my mistake...
It would be interesting indeed... Let's see what will come out of it!
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01-26-2009, 05:42 PM | #1345 |
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Ha! Don't apologize! I almost said the same thing as you, but more...annoyingly, earlier today. You're all good.
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01-26-2009, 05:46 PM | #1346 |
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I'm really, really sorry to keep you all waiting, but I might not make it to my Monday deadline. I had three papers to write over the weekend all due today (it's already Tuesday here), and I'm drained. Maybe I'll celebrate tonight by finally writing that post.
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01-26-2009, 05:51 PM | #1347 |
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Woah. Where do you live where it's already Tuesday? It's only Monday for me.
Whatever works for me. I'm willing to wait - but I just posted and so can't really speak for others who may be impatient to write. Hey, Nogrod, since the sword fights have already taken place, in theory, you could write something concerning the boys. As you said, it is open ended and can be continued. Should be - if the grown ups are really interested in knowing what the bet was. -- Folwren
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01-26-2009, 05:55 PM | #1348 |
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Somewhere to the left of the Pacific Ocean, Foley.
If people want to post ahead, it's alright. Anyway, my post concerning Randver will have to go back all the way to when Ginna and Degas were still fighting. Ooh, time problems. Will that work? Oh, and Gwath - please have Crabannan ready to be approached while watching that match. |
01-26-2009, 11:05 PM | #1349 | |
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I am interested to see where this is going.
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01-28-2009, 04:52 PM | #1350 |
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Okay...well...I'm sorry to be a nudge, but something needs to happen. Nogrod or Lommy? Do you want to kill more time and do more stuff with the boys? I'm game if you are.
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01-28-2009, 09:30 PM | #1351 |
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Normally I would say "let's let Lhuna post as soon as she can, retrospectively, and let's go ahead with the story," but I think what Rand does is going to be too pivotal, so I just feel that we have to wait. Sorry.
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01-29-2009, 06:18 AM | #1352 | |
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01-31-2009, 04:42 AM | #1353 |
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I was REALLY worried you would be impatient, too, Elempi. But here it is. Finally. Well, after I post it.
By the way, I hope you don't mind if I put words into Harreld's mouth. Let me know if it needs to be changed, please. |
01-31-2009, 07:54 AM | #1354 |
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Great! That was a wonderful post, Lhuna! This is exciting.
I thought you'd appreciate being told that you twice said 'her daughter' instead of 'his daughter' when talking about Ginna. In the first sentence of the second paragraph, and the last sentence in the third. Does this mean that you'll be around more often a bit? *hopeful grin* I won't be able to post for the next two days, but I doubt my characters will be called upon much, unless it were Saeryn. -- Foley
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*facedesk* I guess that shows how haggard I was while writing that post. I shall go edit. Of course I want always to be around, but it's not easy to find time for that lately. Perhaps once things pick up, I'll find that when there's a will, there's a way. Last edited by Lhunardawen; 01-31-2009 at 08:37 AM. Reason: unsplitted infinitive |
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01-31-2009, 08:33 AM | #1356 |
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Oh, and in case I had been way too vague, that was Crabannan whom Randvér approached. Gwath, you're up!
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01-31-2009, 09:18 AM | #1357 |
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Oh, ok.
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02-03-2009, 12:44 AM | #1358 |
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Back to you, Lhuna.
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02-04-2009, 05:54 AM | #1359 |
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I'm stuck. I want to post but can't until Lhuna does....again. Tedium is setting in.
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02-04-2009, 08:35 AM | #1360 |
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I'm really sorry, I have 6 lab reports and 2 oral reports to work on for this week. I didn't think I could manage a post, but it was the all caps that did it. Thanks for the pressure, Elempi. And no, I'm not being sarcastic or biting or anything negative - I mean it. At least I know now that I really work well under pressure.
Anyway, I know my post veered away from what I told you before, but my original plan no longer fits the circumstances: Randvér would not talk to another person to point the smith out to him; it seems to me that there wouldn't be enough time anyway, as it didn't seem like a long match; and Ginna and Harreld's exchange would seem out of place if it followed a conversation between Harreld and Randvér. But don't worry, I still intend to have Randvér corner Harreld eventually before Ginna realises that he's around. How, I'm not yet quite sure. |
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