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Aylwen Dreamsong · 03-06-2004, 08:36 PM

Hey Tara,

I did a lot that involved actions from both Laurel and Cuor in my post. If any of them seem out of character or not cool with you let me know and I'll edit gladly. Also, I was going to continue on with Laurel using the daggers to kill Cuor, but trailed off as I wasn't sure if you had special plans with Cuor's death (he is dying, right?).

Kryssal,

Great posts!

-Aylwen

Taralphiel · 03-06-2004, 10:54 PM

I second that!

*applauds*

I have posted Cuor dying, and while editing the last posts I made, put Annunfuin in there.

My idea on what happens next is this.

We carry the bodies of the fallen to Taralphiel's house. From there Im not so sure.

Do you think Leena should go back to Gondor? And what of Jesslyn? Im not sure it makes sense to bury them there...and from what I remember, Thagon's funeral was not actually posted.

After that, we'll have a happy mopping up! :

:

Kryssal · 03-07-2004, 02:39 AM

We could have Thagon's body simply decomposing (or lying if it sounds better

at the House. I personally don't care where Leena gets burried, though her family might. *shrugs* Like I said, I personally don't care.

Good posts yourselves

Taralphiel · 03-08-2004, 05:00 AM

hmm...

Well, I dont know if Thagon would be decomposing.... Im no biology student though

I think Ill have Gellick take them back to Gondor together, that sounds all nicey-like

Kryssal · 03-08-2004, 04:03 PM

Tara me baps, as soon as someone dies they start to decompose. Starting with the bacteria in the stomach to start eating all the organs. Basically, your body eats itself from the inside out, slowly. Just in case you wanted to know.

Taralphiel · 03-09-2004, 12:17 AM

*reads*

*pauses*

They'll be buried.....quickly!!!!!

Aylwen: Do you wish to take the stage next?

Then I shall post Gita's end. She stumbles in on the wrong Elf

Kryssal · 03-09-2004, 03:49 PM

Which Elf would this be? Rud? Or one of mine? lol

Taralphiel · 03-10-2004, 03:42 AM

*giggles*

Rud, yes.

I wanted him to play some part in it

Aylwen Dreamsong · 03-10-2004, 04:09 PM

I'll try and put a post up tonight or sometime tomorrow. If either of you want to post before then, feel free and I'll just add it to my post.

-Aylwen

Taralphiel · 03-11-2004, 09:44 PM

Thanks for the posts Aylwen

I made a reply. I will go further with the post if you give the word. As far as Cartil and Laurel talking to Taralphiel.

From there we bury the dead, and close it all up

Kryssal · 03-13-2004, 01:10 AM

I personally didn't want to dwell on the fields too much. I hope it's ok what I did, if not, I can always edit/delete. I'll write a much longer post soon, but school starts again soon and I need to write some papers. I'm thinking I'll get one up tomorrow.

Also, Aylwen, Annunfuin is a male human, I was confused with:
by the Elf's sudden change
"Cartil," Annunfuin began, but her voice stopped

See you in the posts

~Kryss

Aylwen Dreamsong · 03-13-2004, 07:11 AM

Ooopsies.

Must have been pretty tired when I posted. It will be edited, no worries!

-Aylwen

Kryssal · 03-13-2004, 05:18 PM

Yes, yes Tara, I am a bit evil, but if you don't want Taralphiel to speak I'll edit.....but I thought it was kinda natural for her to do so. Anyhow, any problems, let me know.

Taralphiel · 03-15-2004, 03:04 AM

Perfect Kryssal! No changes needed!

I have put Rudhchamions two cents in there

Aylwen, I didnt want to control Cartil all that much, so I hope my post is okay. Plase let me know if you wish to put a response in ie will Cartil stay, does he want Jesslyn to be buried there....

Also Kryssal, will Lanaey be staying for a small while? And do you wish to put that in? Annanoldowen will head off home, as will Herebrand and Ohtaredan and Gellick. They will be put in my last post, so you do not have to worrry about them.

Ill also take care of Gorath and Galain.

Almost done!!!!

Kryssal · 03-16-2004, 07:22 PM

Sure, sure, now you take them all off my hands

I'll put it in that Lanaey will stay for awhile....she doesn't know how long yet

Taralphiel · 03-24-2004, 03:08 AM

eek! Sorry for my absense. Im just getting used to a new Year of University

Aylwen: Do you want to post a reply? Its fine if you dont, just let me know if you have any preferences of how you want Cartil to end up, and Ill chuck it in

Kryss: Do you want to post for them? *giggles*

I just felt bad that you had to post for so many characters!

Aylwen Dreamsong · 03-24-2004, 05:29 AM

I'd post, but I don't want to make you guys wait for me until I get time to post. I just don't want to hold you up, so if you guys want to wrap up everything in the next two, maybe three days, go ahead. I just want Cartil to end up staying with Laurel.

If I do get time though I'll squeeze a post in!

Kryssal · 03-24-2004, 05:18 PM

Nah, you'd know better than me what they'd do anyway. I will put them in saying a goodbye to Lanaey or vice versa probably. I'm just waiting for Taralphiel to give her speach thingy to the people at the new buriel grounds.

Taralphiel · 03-25-2004, 01:51 AM

Ill post Cartil going to the house, and the speech

Kryss: Are the brothers there? When I figure out what they are up to Ill have Rudhchamion tell them he is off, and they can follow if they like

I also cant remember where Annanoldowen is....

Im putting the speech in now, but its an incomplete post

Id like you to post before I close it up Aylwen. I dont want to wrap up Cartil's story, as I dont think I'd do it justice

Kryssal · 03-26-2004, 12:47 AM

Gorath is recovering in the house.

At the moment, Annanodolwen is with Lanaey at the speach, she'll go back to helping the wounded I'd imagine.

Galain is seeing to the burning of the bodies.

I left out him breaking down tents and stuff because I figured the settlers would want to go through and take anything that could help them. I know they probably wouldn't want to, but it is practical since their village was hurt so badly.

I'll bring back Galain, who will be with his brother. I can write out their leaving an' all if you like.

I'll post tomorrow.

Taralphiel · 03-26-2004, 07:39 PM

Okay... *thinks*

Ill have Rudhchamion visit Gorath tell them as soon as he is fit that tey will leave.

I was thinking that maybe by that time Annanoldowen would have done her job and leave with the brothers and Rudhchamion as well.

Sound good?

Im adding to my post now.

Kryssal · 03-28-2004, 10:08 PM

Lets get this finished

. I have finals coming up rather quickly and would like to not have too much to do. I'm especially overloading myself because I'm leaving school a week early, so I have to finish everything uber early.

I'm just a-waitin'

~Kryss

Taralphiel · 03-29-2004, 12:25 AM

I have stuff to study for as well...blergh....

Well Kryss, your characters are almost finished, arent they? I think one more post aught to do it *nods*

Aylwen: Could you post for Cartil? Make it your last if you like, and then Ill wrap it up with a post for Laurel and Taralphiel.

Oh, and if I go missing for a few days, please forgive me! Compie is on the fritz :P

Aylwen Dreamsong · 03-29-2004, 05:30 AM

No problemo. I'll get one up today, but there's not much for finishing Cartil's part in this story, so it might be a bit short.

-Aylwen

Edit: Yup, I posted. It's quite short, I apologize. Cartil has left the building.

Taralphiel · 03-30-2004, 12:01 AM

Thankyou so much Aylwen, your post wasnt to short. Just perfect!

Its been a pleasure, and thanks for all your help!

Kryss: Do you have any more to add?

Kryssal · 03-30-2004, 12:07 AM

Just to see the Elves off I suppose and starting a new town (promising type entry from Laurel or Taralphiel I'd suspect)

Kryssal · 03-31-2004, 04:41 PM

don't mean to be a pooper, but wouldn't Cartil take his sister home first? Then return to Swan Wood?

Taralphiel · 03-31-2004, 07:39 PM

hmm....you have a point *noddity*

How does this sound? In my last post I have Laurel leaving with Cartil to take Jess home? Thinking about it, they would need help, so Annunfuin would come along?

How would they do something like that? A cart I suppose......

Thanks for that Kryss!

Do you want to put the next post in?

Aylwen Dreamsong · 03-31-2004, 08:38 PM

Heee, Cartil has so little respect for the dead!

Wonderful point, Kryss. Sounds fine though, Tara...

Oh, and I never got to say my farewells! 'Twas a pleasure playing with everyone, and I hope to RP with you guys again! Bravo, for us hanging in there till the end, even when everyone else dropped out! Yay!

-Aylwen

Kryssal · 04-01-2004, 11:50 PM

Sure, I'll put the next one in. I'll have Laurel and Taralphiel ask to help be in charge of rebuilding (if that's cool, I'll have it they've heard she's planning on staying anyway). Then that'll give Laurel the opportunity to go with Cartil.

For Jess, in a closed coffin would be best. Also might want to load that puppy with flowers to help temporarily. I can put that in as well.

Aylwen, thank you for sticking it through with us

I love this thing and am so going to print it up. Long sucker too - lol.

Anyhow, for my post I'll put in Lanaey ordering some willing helpers to go around and loot the deserted encampment and such and have Laurel and Taralphiel come up and make their request for her to formerly help. Then Laurel will tell of her plans and such. We'll pack up Jesslyn and Lanaey will say something then I'll cut off so that you can finish the talk and then head off with any messages you want Tara.

Sound good?

Kryssal · 04-03-2004, 01:04 PM

Once I get the go ahead, I'll post

Taralphiel · 04-05-2004, 05:02 AM

*begs forgiveness from Kryss*

Yes, most certainly! Go ahead!

Im sorry, I have had a bad weekend, and a worse week ahead *giggles*

You actually love this story that much? I thought you would have been shockingly annoyed with me by now!!! :P

Kryssal · 04-05-2004, 11:09 PM

annoyed? I'll post within the next few days. If anything, I'm annoyed with all the people who couldn't stick it through. If you know what I mean

Then again, I really did enjoy playing all those other characters

Taralphiel · 04-09-2004, 09:00 PM

*sniffles and applauds*

BRILLIANT! *grins*

that was so cute!!! Now lets see what ending I can come up with....

Taralphiel · 04-09-2004, 09:32 PM

And so ends our story, Kryssal!

I really considered you a co-manager in all of this!! You really helped me keep this alive, and now we have a happy ending to show for it!

*huggles you tight*

Thakyou to every writer who made an impact on this, we are grateful!

piosenniel · 04-12-2004, 02:46 AM

Well done, Tara, Kryssal, and Aylwen!

~*~ Pio

Bêthberry · 04-14-2004, 11:22 AM

Indeed, well done and a course well-stayed, Writers of the Mark.

And now, ... to Elvenhome.

03-06-2004, 08:36 PM	#441
Aylwen Dreamsong The Melody of Misery Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Island of Conclusions (You get there by jumping!)... Posts: 1,147	Hey Tara, I did a lot that involved actions from both Laurel and Cuor in my post. If any of them seem out of character or not cool with you let me know and I'll edit gladly. Also, I was going to continue on with Laurel using the daggers to kill Cuor, but trailed off as I wasn't sure if you had special plans with Cuor's death (he is dying, right?). Kryssal, Great posts! -Aylwen __________________ ...Come down now, they'll say. But everything looks perfect from far away - Come down now! But we'll stay.

03-06-2004, 10:54 PM	#442
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	I second that! applauds I have posted Cuor dying, and while editing the last posts I made, put Annunfuin in there. My idea on what happens next is this. We carry the bodies of the fallen to Taralphiel's house. From there Im not so sure. Do you think Leena should go back to Gondor? And what of Jesslyn? Im not sure it makes sense to bury them there...and from what I remember, Thagon's funeral was not actually posted. After that, we'll have a happy mopping up! ::

03-10-2004, 04:09 PM	#449
Aylwen Dreamsong The Melody of Misery Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Island of Conclusions (You get there by jumping!)... Posts: 1,147	I'll try and put a post up tonight or sometime tomorrow. If either of you want to post before then, feel free and I'll just add it to my post. -Aylwen __________________ ...Come down now, they'll say. But everything looks perfect from far away - Come down now! But we'll stay.

03-13-2004, 07:11 AM	#452
Aylwen Dreamsong The Melody of Misery Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Island of Conclusions (You get there by jumping!)... Posts: 1,147	Ooopsies. Must have been pretty tired when I posted. It will be edited, no worries! -Aylwen __________________ ...Come down now, they'll say. But everything looks perfect from far away - Come down now! But we'll stay.

03-24-2004, 05:29 AM	#457
Aylwen Dreamsong The Melody of Misery Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Island of Conclusions (You get there by jumping!)... Posts: 1,147	I'd post, but I don't want to make you guys wait for me until I get time to post. I just don't want to hold you up, so if you guys want to wrap up everything in the next two, maybe three days, go ahead. I just want Cartil to end up staying with Laurel. If I do get time though I'll squeeze a post in! __________________ ...Come down now, they'll say. But everything looks perfect from far away - Come down now! But we'll stay.

03-07-2004, 02:39 AM	#443
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	We could have Thagon's body simply decomposing (or lying if it sounds better at the House. I personally don't care where Leena gets burried, though her family might. shrugs Like I said, I personally don't care. Good posts yourselves

03-08-2004, 05:00 AM	#444
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	hmm... Well, I dont know if Thagon would be decomposing.... Im no biology student though I think Ill have Gellick take them back to Gondor together, that sounds all nicey-like

03-08-2004, 04:03 PM	#445
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	Tara me baps, as soon as someone dies they start to decompose. Starting with the bacteria in the stomach to start eating all the organs. Basically, your body eats itself from the inside out, slowly. Just in case you wanted to know.

03-09-2004, 12:17 AM	#446
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	reads pauses They'll be buried.....quickly!!!!! Aylwen: Do you wish to take the stage next? Then I shall post Gita's end. She stumbles in on the wrong Elf

03-09-2004, 03:49 PM	#447
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	Which Elf would this be? Rud? Or one of mine? lol

03-10-2004, 03:42 AM	#448
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	giggles Rud, yes. I wanted him to play some part in it

03-11-2004, 09:44 PM	#450
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	Thanks for the posts Aylwen I made a reply. I will go further with the post if you give the word. As far as Cartil and Laurel talking to Taralphiel. From there we bury the dead, and close it all up

03-13-2004, 01:10 AM	#451
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	I personally didn't want to dwell on the fields too much. I hope it's ok what I did, if not, I can always edit/delete. I'll write a much longer post soon, but school starts again soon and I need to write some papers. I'm thinking I'll get one up tomorrow. Also, Aylwen, Annunfuin is a male human, I was confused with: by the Elf's sudden change "Cartil," Annunfuin began, but her voice stopped See you in the posts ~Kryss

03-13-2004, 05:18 PM	#453
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	Yes, yes Tara, I am a bit evil, but if you don't want Taralphiel to speak I'll edit.....but I thought it was kinda natural for her to do so. Anyhow, any problems, let me know.

03-15-2004, 03:04 AM	#454
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	Perfect Kryssal! No changes needed! I have put Rudhchamions two cents in there Aylwen, I didnt want to control Cartil all that much, so I hope my post is okay. Plase let me know if you wish to put a response in ie will Cartil stay, does he want Jesslyn to be buried there.... Also Kryssal, will Lanaey be staying for a small while? And do you wish to put that in? Annanoldowen will head off home, as will Herebrand and Ohtaredan and Gellick. They will be put in my last post, so you do not have to worrry about them. Ill also take care of Gorath and Galain. Almost done!!!!

03-16-2004, 07:22 PM	#455
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	Sure, sure, now you take them all off my hands I'll put it in that Lanaey will stay for awhile....she doesn't know how long yet

03-24-2004, 03:08 AM	#456
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	eek! Sorry for my absense. Im just getting used to a new Year of University Aylwen: Do you want to post a reply? Its fine if you dont, just let me know if you have any preferences of how you want Cartil to end up, and Ill chuck it in Kryss: Do you want to post for them? giggles I just felt bad that you had to post for so many characters!

03-24-2004, 05:18 PM	#458
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	Nah, you'd know better than me what they'd do anyway. I will put them in saying a goodbye to Lanaey or vice versa probably. I'm just waiting for Taralphiel to give her speach thingy to the people at the new buriel grounds.

03-25-2004, 01:51 AM	#459
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	Ill post Cartil going to the house, and the speech Kryss: Are the brothers there? When I figure out what they are up to Ill have Rudhchamion tell them he is off, and they can follow if they like I also cant remember where Annanoldowen is.... Im putting the speech in now, but its an incomplete post Id like you to post before I close it up Aylwen. I dont want to wrap up Cartil's story, as I dont think I'd do it justice

03-26-2004, 12:47 AM	#460
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	Gorath is recovering in the house. At the moment, Annanodolwen is with Lanaey at the speach, she'll go back to helping the wounded I'd imagine. Galain is seeing to the burning of the bodies. I left out him breaking down tents and stuff because I figured the settlers would want to go through and take anything that could help them. I know they probably wouldn't want to, but it is practical since their village was hurt so badly. I'll bring back Galain, who will be with his brother. I can write out their leaving an' all if you like. I'll post tomorrow.

03-26-2004, 07:39 PM	#461
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	Okay... thinks Ill have Rudhchamion visit Gorath tell them as soon as he is fit that tey will leave. I was thinking that maybe by that time Annanoldowen would have done her job and leave with the brothers and Rudhchamion as well. Sound good? Im adding to my post now.

03-28-2004, 10:08 PM	#462
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	Lets get this finished . I have finals coming up rather quickly and would like to not have too much to do. I'm especially overloading myself because I'm leaving school a week early, so I have to finish everything uber early. I'm just a-waitin' ~Kryss

03-29-2004, 12:25 AM	#463
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	I have stuff to study for as well...blergh.... Well Kryss, your characters are almost finished, arent they? I think one more post aught to do it nods Aylwen: Could you post for Cartil? Make it your last if you like, and then Ill wrap it up with a post for Laurel and Taralphiel. Oh, and if I go missing for a few days, please forgive me! Compie is on the fritz :P

03-29-2004, 05:30 AM	#464
Aylwen Dreamsong The Melody of Misery Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Island of Conclusions (You get there by jumping!)... Posts: 1,147	No problemo. I'll get one up today, but there's not much for finishing Cartil's part in this story, so it might be a bit short. -Aylwen Edit: Yup, I posted. It's quite short, I apologize. Cartil has left the building. __________________ ...Come down now, they'll say. But everything looks perfect from far away - Come down now! But we'll stay. Last edited by Aylwen Dreamsong; 03-29-2004 at 05:10 PM.

03-30-2004, 12:01 AM	#465
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	Thankyou so much Aylwen, your post wasnt to short. Just perfect! Its been a pleasure, and thanks for all your help! Kryss: Do you have any more to add?

03-30-2004, 12:07 AM	#466
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	Just to see the Elves off I suppose and starting a new town (promising type entry from Laurel or Taralphiel I'd suspect)

03-31-2004, 04:41 PM	#467
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	don't mean to be a pooper, but wouldn't Cartil take his sister home first? Then return to Swan Wood?

03-31-2004, 07:39 PM	#468
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	hmm....you have a point noddity How does this sound? In my last post I have Laurel leaving with Cartil to take Jess home? Thinking about it, they would need help, so Annunfuin would come along? How would they do something like that? A cart I suppose...... Thanks for that Kryss! Do you want to put the next post in?

03-31-2004, 08:38 PM	#469
Aylwen Dreamsong The Melody of Misery Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Island of Conclusions (You get there by jumping!)... Posts: 1,147	Heee, Cartil has so little respect for the dead! Wonderful point, Kryss. Sounds fine though, Tara... Oh, and I never got to say my farewells! 'Twas a pleasure playing with everyone, and I hope to RP with you guys again! Bravo, for us hanging in there till the end, even when everyone else dropped out! Yay! -Aylwen __________________ ...Come down now, they'll say. But everything looks perfect from far away - Come down now! But we'll stay.

04-01-2004, 11:50 PM	#470
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	Sure, I'll put the next one in. I'll have Laurel and Taralphiel ask to help be in charge of rebuilding (if that's cool, I'll have it they've heard she's planning on staying anyway). Then that'll give Laurel the opportunity to go with Cartil. For Jess, in a closed coffin would be best. Also might want to load that puppy with flowers to help temporarily. I can put that in as well. Aylwen, thank you for sticking it through with us I love this thing and am so going to print it up. Long sucker too - lol. Anyhow, for my post I'll put in Lanaey ordering some willing helpers to go around and loot the deserted encampment and such and have Laurel and Taralphiel come up and make their request for her to formerly help. Then Laurel will tell of her plans and such. We'll pack up Jesslyn and Lanaey will say something then I'll cut off so that you can finish the talk and then head off with any messages you want Tara. Sound good?

04-03-2004, 01:04 PM	#471
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	Once I get the go ahead, I'll post

04-05-2004, 05:02 AM	#472
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	begs forgiveness from Kryss Yes, most certainly! Go ahead! Im sorry, I have had a bad weekend, and a worse week ahead giggles You actually love this story that much? I thought you would have been shockingly annoyed with me by now!!! :P

04-05-2004, 11:09 PM	#473
Kryssal Wight Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: I be one of those hick Utahns. Posts: 180	annoyed? I'll post within the next few days. If anything, I'm annoyed with all the people who couldn't stick it through. If you know what I mean Then again, I really did enjoy playing all those other characters

04-09-2004, 09:00 PM	#474
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	sniffles and applauds BRILLIANT! grins that was so cute!!! Now lets see what ending I can come up with....

04-09-2004, 09:32 PM	#475
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	And so ends our story, Kryssal! I really considered you a co-manager in all of this!! You really helped me keep this alive, and now we have a happy ending to show for it! huggles you tight Thakyou to every writer who made an impact on this, we are grateful!