Before the Black Gate

[Mithadan]

During a re-reading of LoTR, I was struck by a few passages in the chapter "The Passage of the Marshes". Late in this chapter, Tolkien describes the lands before the Black Gate. This is some of his most descriptive and vivid writing, and likely hearkens back to his own memories of the trenches in the French no-man's land (indeed he uses this very term, "Noman-lands") during World War I. He writes, in part, as follows:

The gasping pools were choked with ash and crawling muds, sickly white and grey, as if the mountains had vomited the filth of their entrails upon the lands about. High mounds of crushed and powdered rock, great cones of earth fire-blasted and poison-stained, stood like an obscene graveyard in endless rows, slowly revealed in the reluctant light.

Frodo, Sam and Gollum hide behind a mound of slag and later below the lip of a pit, where they evade detection not only by the sentinels who walk upon the buttress over the Black Gate but also a Nazgul which flies overhead. In short, Sauron's "front yard" is unkempt, filled with mounds, pits, craters, hills and ridges, each of which represents a potential hiding place for an enemy. My question is why?

Why does Sauron allow the lands before his Gate to be filled with potential hiding places? Would it not make more sense to reduce these lands to a flat, featureless plain which would allow anyone crossing it to be seen from miles away? In fact, this "Noman-land" allows Frodo, Sam and Gollum to escape detection and pass on to the south and west of Mordor where they eventually enter the Black Land. It seems to me that allowing his front yard to be so unkempt is a gross error in strategy that runs contrary to all military reasoning.

[The Saucepan Man]

I don't suppose that he ever imagined that any of his enemies would ever wish to enter Mordor, or even come near the place, without an army in tow.

Also, Hobbits (and Gollumnified proto-Hobbits) are terribly good at hiding. Perhaps larger and less stealthy types would have less success at avoiding detection.

[davem]

Mithadan

Why does Sauron allow the lands before his Gate to be filled with potential hiding places? Would it not make more sense to reduce these lands to a flat, featureless plain which would allow anyone crossing it to be seen from miles away? In fact, this "Noman-land" allows Frodo, Sam and Gollum to escape detection and pass on to the south and west of Mordor where they eventually enter the Black Land. It seems to me that allowing his front yard to be so unkempt is a gross error in strategy that runs contrary to all military reasoning.

Just a quick thought - or rather a quick quote from Brian Rosebury's book - Tolkien: A Cultural Phenomenon - which I gave in the Chapter by Chapter thread:

..The defeat of the forces of evil should ideally appear, not as a lucky accident, or as a punishment inflicted from outside by a superior power (which deprives the actual process of defeat of any moral significance), but as the practical consequence of wickedness itself: Evil must appear as intrinsically self defeating in the long run. Sauron & his servants, despite their steadily growing superiiority in crude strength & terror, are hindered by weaknesses which are themselves vices: their lack of imagination, the irrational cruelty which denies them the option of voluntary assistance (the victim must be made to act against his own will), & the selfishness which disables their alliances.

In other words Sauron brings about his own destruction by his ofermod

[Theron Bugtussle]

davem, I like that quote. Also, I think that the thrown away barrenness of it is designed to make it harder for an army to approach, no flat easy plain, but full of pits and requiring detours. It would inspire enemies with dread, fear, and depression when they see how Sauron and his minions defile all life around them.

Sort of "Abandon hope, all ye who enter".

And anyway, it was inconceivable that any would come "sneaking" in in such few numbers, as Saucepan indicates.

[Boromir88]

Davem

In other words Sauron brings about his own destruction by his ofermod

I find this to be very true, and there to be a connection between Sauron and Hitler. Sauron and Hitler both in my views made crucial errors that caused their downfall. Here are 3 of Hitler's most crucial mistakes.

1) Hitler knew the 2-front war caused Germany to lose WW1. To avoid this Hitler signed a pact with Stalin to keep him out of the war so Germany wouldn't have to fight 2 fronts. Hitler easily takes all of Western Europe, except Britain, he lost the Battle of Britain. Hitler's mistake comes when he believes Britain is too beat up to do anything so he turns to Russia and starts attacking Russia, well Britain wasn't beaten and soon they would land with American's and allies at Normandy opening up a 2-front war. Actually 3-fronts since soon Italy will fall and forces would be coming from Italy.

2) Simple one Hitler let the same mistake Napolean made when attacking Russia. Hitler kept driving through Russia in the awful cold winters of Russia losing many troops, they lose the Battle of Stalingrad then Russia starts pushing back.

3) Hitler made ill use of his allies, both Mussolini and Stalin signed agreements with Hitler. It really wasn't an "alliance" because all Hitler was doing was just telling them to stay out of the way, do whatever you want just don't fight Germany. He should have used Russia and Italy to his advantage.

Now onto Sauron, you will find a few mistakes Sauron made to be his final destruction and are very much similar to Hitler's mistakes.

1) Sauron again didn't make good use of his ally. Similar to Hitler's agreements with Russia and Italy, Sauron just used Saruman for his own advantage instead of really being an "alliance." I guess you might refer to it as a "weak alliance," Sauron and Saruman hated eachother but both wanted the same thing.

2) Sauron empties mordor to go fight the defenders of the west in front of the Black Gate, while Frodo and Sam slip through the back. Again similar to Hitler who turned his back on Western Europe and focused on the "prize." This is where Saurons arrogance got in the way.

Right now I can't think of any real other mistakes Sauron made besides his thought process of "no one can contend with me," so if someone finds another "mistake" that Sauron made please post it.

[Bêthberry]

Ah! A very good question, Mithadan.

. It seems to me that allowing his front yard to be so unkempt is a gross error in strategy that runs contrary to all military reasoning.

But are the generals always right? And are they always employing the kinds of strategy which the conditions of war require?

I have a very limited understanding of WWI tactics, but I do seem to recall that in hindsight it became very obvious (if not at the time to the men in the trenches) that the generals' understanding of tactics had not kept up with the technology of modern warfare. They used strategies and tactics more suited to pre-machine gun warfare. The very idea of trench warfare, which demanded that men rise up out of trenches and charge straight into guns with large rounds of ammunition in fact derived from the old idea of pitched battle, where one simply form lines (or regimental squares, etc) and marched straight into the enemies' lines, with bayonets/ axes/ swords, etc swinging. This was one thing when the enemy had a weapon with limited capacity to kill at a distance. It was quite another with the array of modern weapons which enabled one soldier to mow down many attackers with one weapon.

In short, the generals who learned their warfare on the playing fields of Eton lacked imagination. Perhaps this is Tolkien's way to suggest that so also does Sauron. Ironic, of course.

On the other hand, it could also suggest Sauron's lack of appreciation for the effects of technology on the landscape. He just does not realise that his technology creates (or allows) the very conditions of his downfall. A little below your excerpt in my edition is this passage:

They had come to the desolation that lay before Mordor: the lasting monument to the dark labour of its slaves that should endure when all their purposes were made void; a land defiled, diseased beyond all healing--unless the Great Sea should enter in and wash it with oblivion. (bolding mine)