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Old 08-01-2024, 12:59 PM   #67
Arvegil145
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Originally Posted by Huinesoron View Post
Given that I'm now on version 4 of the timeline, I've decided "Final Timeline" is clearly incorrect. Version 4 is therefore the Late Timeline.
Another few small nitpicks:

1) where are the diacritics on the names?

2) 'Amras and Amrod' should be 'Amros and Amrod (Amarthan)' - it wasn't a typo

3) Feanor's birth year (3234) is placed after the '3237' entry in your timeline

4) Feanor creating the Tengwar has no date in the timeline

5) Mahtan was replaced by Sarmo according to the note 61 to the 'Shibboleth' (pp. 365-6 of the PoME) - though he was most widely known as Urundil

6) Timeline has 'Argon is Fingolfin's fifth child', when it should be his 'fourth child'


Sorry if I'm being annoying and splitting hairs - I have a sense this timeline is going to have many more versions...
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