Seems fine to me. That gives us a good lead to Bethberry's post so the next stage will be
Bethberry: The lovers intro
Squatter: Halegs first days journey
Aywen: First night time attack from Whisper and Jael as discussed... *wink*
Ransom: aftermath of attack
Palando: lead into Cambere
hope this sounds ok.
Palando
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To the Lands of Arda I fly, upon wings held aloft by the music of the Ainur. There we shall meet anon.
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